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Daeus replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Ok, here’s my edits.
Prologue:
A tree loomed up ahead.
This is a drag on the pacing. Remove or see if you can incorporate into the next sentence.
The girl covered her ginger hair
You already said her hair was ginger. No need to repeat.
The corners of Halle’s mouth turned upwards
Replace ‘Halle’s’ with ‘her’.
She wasn’t far fro…
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years, 5 months ago
Hey all,
Just a reminder that this is happening today from 3-4 PM EST. To access the Q&A, go to https://kingdompen.org/theme-mastery-qa/ Looking forward to interacting with you there!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@I-J-Anderson hey it’s totally not a problem. Life happens. I’m sure all of us understand. 😉
Besides, it’s good to let a topic rest sometimes. Otherwise people get burned out and start hating it.THE THREE LITTLE PIGS IN SHAKESPEAREAN LANGUAGE?! *delighted scream* THAT SOUNDS AWESOME! :”D Tell me how it goes. I’m sure you’ll do great.
And……[Read more]
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Sarah Spradlin replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
LOL, all. Glad to see I am surrounded by other E Js. 😀 @winter-rose To answer your question (in a delayed manner because college and also work) hmmmmm… well, I mean, it would depend on what our end game goal was for world domination. Like, if taking over the world would mean forcing everyone to be nicer and having a streamlined way to fix our…[Read more]
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Daeus changed their profile picture 9 years, 5 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@GracieGirl that’s totally fine. 😉 I can be patient. *cough*I’ll make myself be*cough**cough*
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@emma-flournoy *gasp*
The apocalypse is coming, people. Let’s all bow our heads and pray.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 OH. WOW. I… I really like that. *grins so wide she splits her face* Way to go for a cool spin on a unique twist. *thumbs up*
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@emma-flournoy Me has problems. :/
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Winter-Rose glad you asked! *grins*
Okay, so the whole MBTI system is built on eight letters. A personality type is composed of only four— in your case, INFP.
Each of the eight letters stands for a certain thing.
I= Introvert
N= iNtuitive
F= Feeling
P= PerceivingWhat about the other eight letters? Well, to each of those four I just listed…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus *shakes head* It was coincidental. Don’t let it go to your head. 😉
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@kate-flournoy Eh, well… one wouldn’t want to miss anything.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@kate-flournoy Good job saving the best for last. That’s always my policy. Patience is a virtue.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Yes! Another INTJ! *grins* I’m an INTJ too.
Elvish… fun. 😀 I’ve considered learning it. Along with half a dozen other things I simply don’t have time to do because I spend my time writing… What sorts of genres do you like to write?
Also, can I say I love the Doctor Who refrence(s)? 😀
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Hope Ann replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Yes! Another INTJ! *grins* I’m an INTJ too.
Elvish… fun. 😀 I’ve considered learning it. Along with half a dozen other things I simply don’t have time to do because I spend my time writing… What sorts of genres do you like to write?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Hope *rolls eyes* You would need a booklet… XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@@that_writer_girl_99 yep. Sixteen possible combinations of four out of the eight functions.
ISTP,
ISTJ,
ISFP,
ISFJ,
INTP,
INFP,
INTJ,
INFJ,
ESTP,
ESTJ,
ESFP,
ESFJ,
ENTP,
ENFP,
ENTJ,
ENFJ.😀
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Ah, in that case I will join. For the moment. *stashes away notes about civil war* *opens up booklet about working together*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Hope we just need a group of sixteen with one of each of the different types represented so we get the best of everyone. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper yeah. It’s called growing up. XD
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