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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
@dragon-snapper I might have been called King Daeus once, but I can’t remember clearly. I know we called Josiah The Wiser a couple times. 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
@emma-flournoy *bows low, stroking cliché mustache* Much appreciated.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
😀 😀 😀 😀 😀
I was planning to write right about now, but then this came up, and, well…I’m not disappointed I stopped to read. May the clichés never end!
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 3 months ago
😀 *licks icecream*
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Daeus replied to the topic Book Suggestions in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
Ok, my top recommendations are these:
The Count of Monte Cristo — my all time favorite novel. It’s huge, but well worth every page. It’s historical fiction and high drama.
Cry The Beloved Country — The best explicitly Christian novel I’ve ever read. It’s very deep and very moving. It’s got heart for sure.
A Tale of Two Cities –…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Haha! Yeah–absolutely. Our facebook account can be found here: https://www.facebook.com/kingdompen/ You should be able to access it without having a Facebook.
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Daeus replied to the topic My Attempt in the forum Poetry 9 years, 3 months ago
Thoughts:
The imagery here is good.
First line: wakes works better than awakes.
“No longer free does flow” doesn’t flow well off the tongue.
“the earth had”: “the earth was” works better, I think.
“To warmer weather flee”: Took me a moment to figure out what that meant.
“through flowers flit”: I love the sound of that 🙂
The rythm wasn’t…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic My Attempt in the forum Poetry 9 years, 3 months ago
@Anne-of-Lothlorien the first is beautiful and the second hilarious. XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic My Brother Wants Y'all's Opinion in the forum Film 9 years, 3 months ago
@Anne-of-Lothlorien what @Daeus said. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic My Brother Wants Y'all's Opinion in the forum Film 9 years, 3 months ago
@AnneofLothlorien what @Daeus said. 😛
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Daeus replied to the topic My Brother Wants Y'all's Opinion in the forum Film 9 years, 3 months ago
@Anne-of-Lothlorien I don’t see anything to pick at, but there’s not much more than externals here. Here are my questions to get to the heart of the story.
1. What’s the girl’s inner longing? e.g. she wants her parents to be reunited.
2. What’s the girl’s story goal? e.g. get back to her parents. (it’s best if her longing and goal can be closely…[Read more] -
Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien The first “I don’t know” is Mackenzie; the second is Rolena’s sister who came along for the ride.
@dragon-snapper Here’s the picture Anne was referring to. There are more photos on our social media accounts if you’re able to access them!

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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien The first “I don’t know” is Mackenzie; the second is Rolena’s sister who came along for the ride.
@dragon-snapper Here’s the picture Anne was referring to. There are more photos on our social media accounts if you’re able to access them!

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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien The first “I don’t know” is Mackenzie; the second is Rolena’s sister who came along for the ride.
@dragon-snapper Here’s the picture Anne was referring to. There are more photos on our social media accounts if you’re able to access them!

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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien The first “I don’t know” is Mackenzie; the second is Rolena’s sister who came along for the ride.

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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic Handout for Distribution Among Friends: Brainstorming Needed in the forum Stewards of the Pen 9 years, 3 months ago
Yes, that would work…if you think all the information would fit. I think it’s important to have reminders of why we like KP so much on it, so maybe it could be slightly bigger than a business card but slightly smaller than a postcard. Maybe we need to see what needs to be written on it, then we can see how big it ought to be?
I really like the…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Anyone heard of ACFW or Wors Weavers? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
Hmm. Somebody added me to their facebook group. That might be neat to attend. We’ll see.
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Hannah R. replied to the topic Anyone heard of ACFW or Wors Weavers? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
Oh! And I heard that Realm Makers Conference will be in Pennsylvania next year! (If y’all haven’t heard of Realm Makers, look it up. It looks AMAZING.)
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Handout for Distribution Among Friends: Brainstorming Needed in the forum Stewards of the Pen 9 years, 3 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses I would think a simple business card type of design would work very well. It can have our name, tagline, and website on one side. On the other, it might have the list of things we provide, such as forum/community, courses, articles, contests, etc. What might be really cool is if there were a place on the design for people to…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Anyone heard of ACFW or Wors Weavers? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 3 months ago
@his-instrument Cool! I shall have to check these out.
(@aratrea You’ll have to add these to your list of potential partners.)
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