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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 AHHHHH JOHNATHAN!!!!!!!!!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 I KNOOOOOW!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@joy-caroline thank you!!
@freedomwriter76 btw, so I found a song called No Saving Me by Philemon Lee, and…while it is sad, It fits November’s misbelief sooo well and I feel it would fit Riker too
😭 😭 💔 💔
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 WELLL he does slap him in this book….
but other then that and mental and verbal abuse…mostly no.
except maybe just being very menacing and just giving the reader a “I don’t like u” vibe, like grabbing November’s arm, etc.
He wasn’t really physically abusive. But he did give unfair/demeaning/cruel punishments when he’s you…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
This also happens with Riven. She doesn’t really help November with Riven, and this is a guilt she carries for a long time, knowing she should’ve done something for November because she watches his struggle throughout his life with abuse the man gave him (even though November struggles with recognizing everything as abuse)
Tho as a child Ara…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
The setup is also to show Arabella in her “Normal” world and how she’s struggling and how her flaw is affecting her. This scene really shows that with her not helping November due to her anxieties/fear
We ALL know that after this book, this changes, and Ara is MORE then willing to help out her friends (especially November) whenever they’re in…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
This is part of Ara’s Setup-so this happens during like the very beginning of the book (as of this draft) and for context, the scene starts when Ara is about to be ran over by a horse due to her being distracted but November pushed her outta the way (thankfully XD)
Scene: Setup
POV: Arabella
The horse bared toward her, it’s eyes wide as it r…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 thought all ma charries were already in there XD
also I wanna put a scene on here that’s been written for a long while. It was one of the first scenes I wrote in this draft
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Scene: Dark Night Of The Soul (Picking up after dream sequence) Unfinished still XD
POV: Arabella
(This one’s gonna leave ya on a cliffhanger again ya welcome XD
Ara’s head buzzed. She groaned, swallowing the large lump in her throat. Her mind was heavy; tired, and her ears felt like they’d been stuffed with cotton. Blurry vision gre…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic DRAFTING FORUM!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @joy-caroline HEYO!!! So I have some more of some scenes written! Still not finished yet but yea XD
I wrote some more onto the scene for Ara’s Catalyst moment- That scene where Ganesh enters and is telling her parents something
And some more of the scene after Ara wakes up from the dream where some of…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Who wants a Marvel AU? 😉 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 YESSSSSSS GET HIM LOKIIIIII!!!!!! YESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Who wants a Marvel AU? 😉 in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@keilah-h I can! I’m really trying to wait for @koshka @freedomwriter and @elishavet-pidyon but not sure where they are 😅
Jocelyn
Vulk smirked, giving Lyn the go ahead. She nearly squealed, and rocking on her heels.
Alyona’s eyes widened, glancing over the wall of the roof. She was obviously not near as excited as Lyn was.
Vulkasin placed a c…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@keilah-h true that!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@keilah-h kk just letting ya know Jocelyn is 14
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@keilah-h btw who is feather meeting?? Just so Ik.
also I believe Ezra is a soldier….but again @freedomwriter76 correct me if I’m wrong 🤣
man’s I am so glad ur okay and ur house is okay with the hurricane!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon anyone on??
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 I understand! Ur good! Up to u on the RPs, I honestly don’t mind however many u do cuz I luv making RPs back and reading them XD!! But also know sometimes u don’t want to 🤣
also YAAAAY ON WRITING!!!!! Woohooo!!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @e-m-trepke OH YA I need to RP as Corvina XD
Corvina
Was she gonna stick around?
Hm…
Well…she supposed it wouldn’t do any harm…
Besides, she could leave whenever she wanted. Just like she’d done before.
Besides…she was also looking for some…certain people.
Perhaps these two could help her find them.
And the group they we…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 11 months ago
Heyooooo @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h anyone wanna RP?
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