Faith

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009
XD I’m glad I’m actually making some sense

@whaley

I can understand why it’s tempting to write a character getting their way though.

Maybe it’s because we relate to our own characters so much? And we like getting what we want.

But that’s also how God judges people.
“Your will be done.”

But idk I haven’t t…[Read more]

@rae
Just to clarify, I think that Chase having that flaw makes him a good and realistic character. I’m not critiquing his flaw, I’m critiquing that it’s being shown as a virtue.

@savannah_grace2009 Yayy :]

Why do I always either not respond to these things, or respond with 3+ giant paragraphs?? There’s pretty much no in between XD

@theducktator 8 or 9

@rae

Ok, first off, I love Jenny and also how you made the unicorn have cloven hooves.

I do have some critiques, though. Sorry if they aren’t helpful.

I don’t think giving your characters what they want is a good idea, unless you’re writing a tragedy. If I gave Ellie the safety that she wanted, she would isolate herse…[Read more]

I found a dumb song that made me giggle called I Am Steve by Hey Steve

Been listening to it on repeat XD

@theducktator

Haha I love em!

@theducktar

I am the #1 banana hater, so none :p

@ellette-giselle

hmm I was taking a break, but I have nothing to do for the next three hours so you can give me a description if you want

@ellette-giselle

I think 7 looks the best.

@savannah_grace2009

I have been reading the chapters you’ve been posting but I just haven’t really had any comments cuz I’m bad at critiquing :p they’re all really good, though.

I can’t say I agree with Keilah, either.

@theducktator

I use them for occasional reference, but not all the time. If I’m confused about locations I will check the map, though, and I do often find it helpful, even if you just glance at it to get a general idea of where things are.

@ellette-giselle

Ok!

@ellette-giselle

Oh man, tell me aboit it! My friend is still holding hostage some of my old drawings and I am literally trying to make her promise not to display them at my wedding  someday. lol.

Lolll XD

I’m best at one person. Haven’t tried many couples but I can if you want. I don’t really do action scenes.

Would you prefer pencil or digita…[Read more]

@rae

Yeahh… I don’t think I’m going to be able to finish. Sorry 😅

@ellette-giselle

*stares in horror at super cringey old drawings*

*dies*

🫣🫣

Sure. However expect it to look n.o.t.h.i.n.g. like the nightmares you see on the previous pages 😅

I legit cannot look at those things without cringing so bad.

I think there’s a bit of over explaining going on with the world building (telling not showing), though it’s not as much as I typically see in early drafts.

@linus-smallprint

I’m on chapter three and really enjoying the world building and the characters so far. Congrats on holding my short attention span with your story for this long 😅

I plan on reading the rest tonight :]

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