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Daeus replied to the topic Please critique! Three poems here. in the forum Poetry Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Ah. Still pretty good though.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Hi! Typical me, I typed out a nice little welcoming thingy yesterday, thought I’d hit submit, but actually hadn’t. So I’ve been going all this time thinking I’d welcomed you when I really hadn’t.
Please excuse such rudeness. 😛
Fellow INTJ! Though I think you already know that from the conversation earlier…
@graciegirl KP seems to…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Welcome! I am late, very late, a thousand apologies. 😀
ANOTHER INTJ?!?!? You have got to be kidding me. *face palm* XD Zikers. I’m an INFP-A, btw, and obsessed with MBTI.
YES!!! Sherlock Holmes is awesome!! I just finished the last of the stories about a week ago, and I barely managed to not cry. It was truly the end of an era. Which…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
@daeus @jenali @spradlin I think that we are outnumbered by introverts. Probably a good thing…less cooks in the kitchen make a better concoction.
@that_writer_girl_99 I’m working on it. I haven’t written much in the past few days, but I have it all planned out.
@christi-eaton Aha! Another extrovert!Okay, if Daeus is the dictator, and…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Please critique! Three poems here. in the forum Poetry Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Do you mean age nine? If so, I’m really impressed.
Not that they’re Byron or anything, but for a nine year old, they’re quite good.
I feel really bad, but for once I can’t really pinpoint what needs to be improved with these poems. I know there’s some tone, methodology, or approach about them that’s all the same but I don’t know what…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Ok, here’s my edits.
Prologue:
A tree loomed up ahead.
This is a drag on the pacing. Remove or see if you can incorporate into the next sentence.
The girl covered her ginger hair
You already said her hair was ginger. No need to repeat.
The corners of Halle’s mouth turned upwards
Replace ‘Halle’s’ with ‘her’.
She wasn’t far fro…
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
Step #1: Look at people from the corner of your eyes and say something creepy. This will scare them out of their wits.
Step #2: Turn your head so you’re meeting their gaze full on and slowly pull your mouth into a smile. An evil cackle is optional.
Step #3: At this point, they will be so terrified of you they will just flee.
My…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 You have come to the right internet space for that. *signs you up*
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Jess replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Greetings! I am also one of those rare-as-unicorns INTJ-A people (that seems to be really kind of common here.) Mark of Athena… yesss. But that awful cliffhanger. I nearly died the first time I read that book… 😛 And I love your story premise. It sounds really amazing. 😉 Hope to see you around the forum! *disappears in a…[Read more]
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DelightInLife replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Welcome to KP! I also really enjoy baking! What do you like to bake? That’s awesome that you’re learning Japanese! I’m learning Hindi myself, though I haven’t been working on it as much lately. How long have you been learning the language? 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 OH. WOW. I… I really like that. *grins so wide she splits her face* Way to go for a cool spin on a unique twist. *thumbs up*
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Hope Ann replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Yes! Another INTJ! *grins* I’m an INTJ too.
Elvish… fun. 😀 I’ve considered learning it. Along with half a dozen other things I simply don’t have time to do because I spend my time writing… What sorts of genres do you like to write?
Also, can I say I love the Doctor Who refrence(s)? 😀
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Hope Ann replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Yes! Another INTJ! *grins* I’m an INTJ too.
Elvish… fun. 😀 I’ve considered learning it. Along with half a dozen other things I simply don’t have time to do because I spend my time writing… What sorts of genres do you like to write?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 10 months ago
@emma-flournoy As she explained in her first post, @f5a8c3e92 is a Doctor Who fan. Her username is a reference to the show, not a jab at her ability to exist or not.
@f5a8c3e92 I just saw that you like Rick Riordan, too–which is your favorite book of his?
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Hi! Who cares that you couldn’t think of an original greeting, you’re an INTJ. INTJs are awesome enough to not need original greetings. (And I second Kate, is it so crazy to have yet another female INTJ here. I don’t think we even have a male one, either.)
I’m an ENFJ/ISFJ mix. And —*awed voice*—are you really impossible? ‘Cause if…[Read more] -
Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 10 months ago
Welcome to the site, @f5a8c3e92! I can very much sympathize with school getting in the way of writing. xD The story of my life anymore is how much college work I can push off/ignore in order to find time to write. Great author list there as well. I espy many of my favorites on that list, particularly Austen. Do you have a favorite Austen work?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Ah, yes! I’ve been waiting for another Doctor Who fan for so long you could call me…”the Girl Who Waited”! I’m a huge fan of Doctor Who (and references of the sort) myself, so it’s great to meet you.
Also, because I don’t think I’ve said this, yet–I’m an INFP. That’s Introvert, Intuition, Feeling, and Perception, if I remember…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 I could never eat ten slices of pizza, even as a dragon, so you have earned my undying respect. *bows* The most I’ve ever eaten of one thing are pancakes a church thing once…something like eight. (or was it thirteen???) Who knows?
Piano I play as well, though I started about six months ago. On the other hand, I play guitar, and have…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!
I literally got a kick out of you saying ‘learnt’. Thank you for being Australian.
I’m also really excited that you’re learning elvish. I’ve been considering inventing some languages for the fantasy trilogy I’m planning to start in about a month, so you can expect me to endlessly…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 10 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Welcome welcome and thrice welcome fellow Tolkien fan and pianist and MBTI lover! KP is an amazing place and I’m sure you’ll be right at home in no time.
I’m also an INFP. And for the record, we have about five (at least) other INTJs on this forum and they’re all girls which just freaks me out because they’re supposed to be as rare as…[Read more] - Load More