The Impossible Girl

@that_writer_girl_99 Which they don’t, obviously. *cackles evilly*

@hope @kate-flournoy If you know anyone else who will be kind enough to critique, please guide them to this thread.

@hope @everyone If you know anyone else who will be kind enough to critique, please guide them to this thread.

If you know anyone else who will be kind enough to critique, please guide them to this thread.

@daeus *mockingly pretends to scribble down notes* Hmm… yes. Lily pads. @kate-flournoy Hahahaha. INTJs will rule the world!

@that_writer_girl_99 Sarcasm is my native language (and I’m sure the other INTJs can relate). XD

@emma-flournoy @graciegirl @ethryndal @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @jane-maree Can you guys please critique? Thanks.

@emma-flournoy @graciegirl @ethryndal @winter-rose @that_write_girl_99 @jane-maree Can you guys please critique? Thanks.

@emma-flourney @graciegirl @ethryndal @winter-rose @that_write_girl_99 @jane-maree Can you guys please critique? Thanks.

I wouldn’t mind a few more critiques: https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/excerpt-from-novel-please-critique/#post-30351.
@daeus did a great job, though. 🙂

@emma-flournoy I was trying to think of a negative, but I really couldn’t. XD

@graciegirl Read it. It’s good.

@daeus Thanks! 🙂

@daeus Haha. No. These are from when I was in grade 9. Sorry if that was confusing.

@ethryndal @graciegirl It’s really great seeing so many female INTJs on here.

@graciegirl Hi. The Adventures of Sherlock Holmes will remain my favourite, as it was the first of the books that I read. The one that introduced me to the brilliant Sherlock Holmes. A Study in Scarlet, A Scandal in Bohemia and The Final Problem always stand out to me. Thanks.

Now for something more positive. A proper Rogue One review.

Summary: Rogue One is a filler story set in between Episodes 3 and 4. It explains those missing details that fans have been pondering for years. Why is the Death Star so easy to destroy? How did Leia get this information? It is also the second Star Wars film to be focused on a female…[Read more]