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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 13 Feb 2025 19:01:20 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> you&#8217;re welcome!!!</p>
<p>and yep! should be done and posted later today.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 13 Feb 2025 18:44:08 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> oh man that art looks awesome!! I love it!</p>
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<p>nahh it&#8217;s something different, although I did adapt many of my concepts for the dragons and the sci-fi galaxy concept into it.</p>
<p>I did do some Star Wars dragon art today though! I gotta finish the background before I post it though.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 11 Feb 2025 17:57:20 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> how did i mess up your tag bruhhhh</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 08 Dec 2024 21:33:18 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> haha thanks! I’ll be sure to post the chapter or something when I write it.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 08 Dec 2024 19:59:13 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> oh wow that one’s cool too!</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>not much. Been writing warrior cats fan fiction, some of which includes the Bad Batch as minor characters.</p>
<p>actually, I inserted an adult version of Markus (your version of Tech’s kid, if I remember right) into one of them recently as an homage to your ideas lol. He hasn’t shown up yet, but I’m t&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-190361"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/13/#post-191523" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 08 Dec 2024 18:41:11 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> MAN that is an awesome drawing! Which scene was that?</p>
<p>(I can’t do good shading to save my life, so I’m super impressed with yours.)</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/13/#post-190824</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 03 Dec 2024 17:50:43 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> I see you&#8217;ve continued!</p>
<p>It&#8217;s getting good!! Not that it wasn&#8217;t already awesome lol</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/13/#post-185989</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 18 Sep 2024 21:54:51 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> lol plot work never works for me either</p>
<p>I&#8217;d love to see what you&#8217;ve got if you have a story structure or something! Seeing the whole plot laid out might help me give you feedback on where you could go next.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 17 Sep 2024 17:45:47 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> cool, I look forward to seeing it!</p>
<p>(probably a good idea to at least finish draft one though lol, but hey, I&#8217;m also guilty of starting a second draft without finishing the first)</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/13/#post-185886</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 16 Sep 2024 19:09:52 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> personally, I didn&#8217;t think it was too slow! it was fine to me.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/13/#post-185747</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 12 Sep 2024 20:09:03 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> heyyyy I noticed your fanfic now says &#8220;Draft One.&#8221; Are you already working on a second draft? Can I see it yet or is it off limits?</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic It&#039;s been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/its-been-a-while-2/page/2/#post-184717</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 20 Aug 2024 18:39:01 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> lol tagged ya on the forum and also said I&#8217;ll repost it if I have to.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/talking-about-are-fanfics/page/109/#post-184713</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 20 Aug 2024 17:51:40 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> here! It&#8217;s on page 128, I tagged Freedom, Smiley and Shadow, and the link is hidden in the words &#8220;here it is&#8221;. I can also repost it if you&#8217;d like.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic It&#039;s been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 20 Aug 2024 00:59:44 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> I&#8217;ve been doing good!! Been writing a fanfic (It&#8217;s not Star Wars but it&#8217;s a sci-fi, I have it up in the fan fiction chat if you&#8217;d like to see it), and also playing some Minecraft and this game series called <em>World Of Goo</em>. There are two games and I&#8217;ve beaten both of them.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic It&#039;s been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 18 Aug 2024 19:45:05 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> Oh I did? LOL I don&#8217;t remember that, but ok!</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>shame you got sick but hey, at least you have free time to learn to write Crosshair&#8217;s personality!</p>
<p>also, it&#8217;s ok if he&#8217;s a little off character, considering we have <em>no</em> idea how he&#8217;d react to having a daughter that&#8217;s been separated from him for pretty much about her entire existence.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic It&#039;s been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 18 Aug 2024 19:31:21 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> ikr?</p>
<p>also here&#8217;s a fanfic tip: Wanna learn how to write Crosshair correctly? Learn his mannerisms. Get inside his gray-haired, burn-scarred head. Re-watch Bad Batch, every scene with Crosshair. If you&#8217;re allowed to do so, I&#8217;m pretty sure you can find YouTube videos that&#8217;s like &#8220;Bad Batch but only when Crosshair is on screen&#8221; or&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-182994"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/its-been-a-while-2/#post-184626" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Evelyn collins replied to the topic It&#039;s been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 18 Aug 2024 19:26:02 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic It&#039;s been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/its-been-a-while-2/#post-184622</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 18 Aug 2024 19:18:01 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> lollll you just can&#8217;t make that kinda stuff up can ya?</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>People mispronounce my name all the time, or they hear it before they read it and then spell it as &#8220;Kayla.&#8221; I got used to it a long time ago XD</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic It&#039;s been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 18 Aug 2024 18:47:18 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> yeah I get that, it&#8217;s just how it is sometimes&#8230;</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<blockquote><p>also, believe it or not, I have been called Eveln in real life face to face with someone, along with just about a hundred other much less accurate names, including Nora… for half a year.</p></blockquote>
<p>How does someone make that mistake?? LOL</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>if you have any other questions about your s&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-182987"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/its-been-a-while-2/#post-184619" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic It&#039;s been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 17 Aug 2024 19:09:25 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> blahhh messed up your tag</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 09 Jun 2024 20:16:57 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> wow so cool!! Markus and Buck belong to Tech and Hunter, respectively?</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 07 Jun 2024 16:43:41 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> yes please!!!</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>hmm&#8230;&#8230;Well, she could steal one of those datapads. No doubt they have maps. Or maybe she could threaten a droid into telling her&#8230;&#8230;&#8221;Don&#8217;t alert anyone or I&#8217;ll dismantle you!! I&#8217;ve had practice! Now tell me where the prisons are!&#8221; That kinda thing.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 06 Jun 2024 18:36:35 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> pictures are back up so you can post fan art for your characters now!</p>
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				<title>TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hi… I’m back! in the forum Start HERE</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 21 May 2024 21:17:53 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>oh yeah, timelines make writing fanfics so hard &#x1f62d;</p>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 21 May 2024 18:23:50 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/loopylin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@loopylin</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/keilah-h/' rel="nofollow ugc">@keilah-h</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/ava-blue/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ava-blue</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/mineralizedwritings/' rel="nofollow ugc">@mineralizedwritings</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lightoverdarkness6/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lightoverdarkness6</a> @freedom @euodia <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/folith-feolin/' rel="nofollow ugc">@folith-feolin</a> and everyone else…</p>
<p>Um… hi &#x1f44b;</p>
<p>It’s been like a solid year since I’ve been on here regularly, but I’m back!! &#x1f449;&#x1f448;&#x1f62c;&#x1f605; I just had a wonderful mix of school, life, regular busyness, and of course the ever terrible writers block. But I’m starting to&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-177628"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/hi-im-back/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Keilah H. posted an update: @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper [&#133;]</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 04 May 2024 20:07:21 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>I&#8217;m going on a two-week cruise tomorrow!! Which means I&#8217;ll be disconnected from the Internet for the most part. Y&#8217;all can still tag me in stuff,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-177077"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/activity/p/177077/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 28 Apr 2024 19:25:08 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> ohhh ok!!</p>
<p>I won&#8217;t give you any spoilers &#x1f609;</p>
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<p>hmmmm&#8230;&#8230;IDK. I&#8217;ve run out of suggestions lol, I guess just look back at my old ones&#8230;..</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 26 Apr 2024 16:21:18 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> heyy! Been working on the story any, or are still a bit stuck on it?</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>also WE&#8217;VE GOT ONE MORE EPISODE TO GO!!! I can&#8217;t imagine how it&#8217;s gonna end, but I&#8217;m terrified for the boys cause I know someone is gonna die.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 06 Apr 2024 18:46:24 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> Really?</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 06 Apr 2024 17:40:42 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> oooh I just read what you wrote recently! The plot is thickening lol</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 20 Mar 2024 19:18:10 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> it&#8217;s in the same genes that control the gray hair and sniper eyes XD</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>seriously though, I do a lot of things like my dad, and my mom says it really is in our blood since he and I have the same blood type</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 20 Mar 2024 19:09:21 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> was just reading the latest bit of your story!</p>
<p>tbh I love how you wrote Leo being annoyed at the bird flying outside her window lol</p>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 17 Mar 2024 22:57:34 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> ooh, this is gettin&#8217; good!</p>
<p>one little edit though&#8211;Emerie introduced herself twice??? maybe rework that scene so she doesn&#8217;t say her full name until Leo asks for it.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 15 Mar 2024 16:33:10 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>well, I had some ideas if you flip back a page or two</p>
<p>Want me to repost them or are you ok with looking for them?</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 05 Mar 2024 21:19:58 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> yeahh that makes a lot of sense!</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 05 Mar 2024 21:14:55 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> ooh, another idea I had&#8230;.</p>
<p>Maybe this last flashback was a dream? And when she&#8217;s dreaming about it, something happens that didn&#8217;t happen when she actually did it. She wakes up and wonders why her brain went to that when it clearly didn&#8217;t happen in her memories, then realized it was a dream. That sets up her being on the Imperial ship.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 05 Mar 2024 00:48:07 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> all righty!</p>
<p>Ideas (You can take or leave any of them):</p>
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<li>Leo awakes imprisoned on a starship in hyperspace, Crosshair guarding her. She is going to confront him, but he&#8217;s called away before she can really get anything out of him, or some other stormtroopers take her away or something. They take her on an Imperial shuttle to&hellip;</li>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 04 Mar 2024 20:51:20 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> I don&#8217;t think so. I was just asking what you needed help with. Sorry about being so blunt lol</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 04 Mar 2024 20:43:45 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> what do you need help with?</p>
<p>oh also I probably can&#8217;t post links here right now (they&#8217;re affected in the same way as pictures probably) but I found this hilarious short video of the actor for the clones messing around with with Hunter, Wrecker and Crosshair action figures and doing all their voices. It was so funny.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. posted an update: @lydibug @whalekeeper Once you&#039;re done with The Bad Batch, [&#133;]</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 29 Feb 2024 21:11:12 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/lydibug/' rel="nofollow ugc">@lydibug</a> <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/whalekeeper/' rel="nofollow ugc">@whalekeeper</a> Once you&#8217;re done with The Bad Batch, you two should check out <a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> &#8216;s awesome fanfiction of it! I think you probably will have to watch through at least the first two seasons in order to get a bit of the story, but it&#8217;s really fun to read.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 29 Feb 2024 20:27:53 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> you bet! All four!!</p>
<p>It was kinda simultaneously sad and funny, when Omega reunited with Hunter and Wrecker and they&#8217;re all hugging her, then Crosshair comes and they&#8217;re just like &#8220;You&#8217;re very sus&#8230;..&#8221; and just stare at him for the remaining 30 seconds of the episode.</p>
<p>I was like &#8220;What? No hug for him? Not even from you,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-174755"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/9/#post-177038" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 26 Feb 2024 23:20:57 -0500</pubDate>

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<p>Wow!</p>
<p>Just read what you recently wrote.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m assuming they&#8217;re taking her to the Tantiss facility or something? (That&#8217;s the name of the base btw, not the planet. I believe the planet itself is called Weyland?)</p>
<p>She&#8217;ll probably come into contact with her father a lot now&#8230;.Not that she&#8217;ll like it.</p>
<p>OR, maybe Crosshair gets sent to&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-174518"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/9/#post-176798" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Esther replied to the topic Preachiness, Allegories, Analogies, and Every Other Way to Implement Your Theme in the forum Mission, Calling &#038; Ethics</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 25 Feb 2024 19:07:02 -0500</pubDate>

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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 23 Feb 2024 20:10:23 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> weird. Sometimes pictures glitch though. This must be one of those days&#8230;..</p>
<p>Hey, if you can tell me exactly what you&#8217;re stuck on, I might be able to help, although I&#8217;ll have to get back to you on it in a day or two because I have to get off in a sec.</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 23 Feb 2024 19:58:09 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> nope, still glitched, try another way of putting it into the window</p>
<p>hit the insert/edit image and then get it from your computer or phone&#8217;s files?</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>you&#8217;re welcome for the idea! I love having a fellow Star Wars fanfic writer to talk to lol. I can&#8217;t wait to see it if you end up writing it!</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 23 Feb 2024 19:26:40 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> ooh, one thing you could do is write a short prequel from Crosshair&#8217;s POV, starting off much the same way that episode starts off, but instead of Rampart sending him off with Cody, he&#8217;s like &#8220;You&#8217;re coming with me to investigate this planet.&#8221;</p>
<p>It could also give a little detail as to why Cross is tracking Leo, but makes no effort&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-174216"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/8/#post-176539" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 23 Feb 2024 17:54:40 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> ah ok makes sense</p>
<p>so what canon events did happen? Like obviously Crosshair joined the Empire, the rest of the Batch are probably doing mercenary missions right now, etc&#8230;.</p>
<p>So would you say this story happens in roughly season 1&#8217;s, 2&#8217;s, or 3&#8217;s place on the actual timeline? I&#8217;d go for 2 maybe if we absolutely had to quantify it,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-174205"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/8/#post-176529" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 22 Feb 2024 22:32:51 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> cool beans, is he in the story? probably not because the timeline wouldn&#8217;t match up no matter how you tweaked it. He&#8217;d always end up like 15 years younger than Leo lol</p>
<p>But you can always make a different AU for him to inhabit. Maybe one where tech never died? Maybe he was just hurt or something? (My profile pic depicts him as a&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-174163"><a href="https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/my-star-wars-fanfic/page/8/#post-176491" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 22 Feb 2024 00:17:52 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> I haven&#8217;t yet, but I should soon!</p>
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				<title>Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 11 Feb 2024 23:21:57 -0500</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://kingdompen.org/members/evelyn-collins/' rel="nofollow ugc">@evelyn-collins</a> so when Hemlock &#8220;properly introduces&#8221; Leo and Cross&#8230;&#8230;.do you think she&#8217;ll hate her father at first for a while, or will she forgive him pretty early on?</p>
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