@evelyn-collins
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins you bet! All four!!
It was kinda simultaneously sad and funny, when Omega reunited with Hunter and Wrecker and they’re all hugging her, then Crosshair comes and they’re just like “You’re very sus…..” and just stare at him for the remaining 30 seconds of the episode.
I was like “What? No hug for him? Not even from you,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 12 months ago
Wow!
Just read what you recently wrote.
I’m assuming they’re taking her to the Tantiss facility or something? (That’s the name of the base btw, not the planet. I believe the planet itself is called Weyland?)
She’ll probably come into contact with her father a lot now….Not that she’ll like it.
OR, maybe Crosshair gets sent to…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Preachiness, Allegories, Analogies, and Every Other Way to Implement Your Theme in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 12 months ago
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(I tried to tag everyone, but I know I probably missed a ton of…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins weird. Sometimes pictures glitch though. This must be one of those days…..
Hey, if you can tell me exactly what you’re stuck on, I might be able to help, although I’ll have to get back to you on it in a day or two because I have to get off in a sec.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins nope, still glitched, try another way of putting it into the window
hit the insert/edit image and then get it from your computer or phone’s files?
you’re welcome for the idea! I love having a fellow Star Wars fanfic writer to talk to lol. I can’t wait to see it if you end up writing it!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins ooh, one thing you could do is write a short prequel from Crosshair’s POV, starting off much the same way that episode starts off, but instead of Rampart sending him off with Cody, he’s like “You’re coming with me to investigate this planet.”
It could also give a little detail as to why Cross is tracking Leo, but makes no effort…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins ah ok makes sense
so what canon events did happen? Like obviously Crosshair joined the Empire, the rest of the Batch are probably doing mercenary missions right now, etc….
So would you say this story happens in roughly season 1’s, 2’s, or 3’s place on the actual timeline? I’d go for 2 maybe if we absolutely had to quantify it,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins cool beans, is he in the story? probably not because the timeline wouldn’t match up no matter how you tweaked it. He’d always end up like 15 years younger than Leo lol
But you can always make a different AU for him to inhabit. Maybe one where tech never died? Maybe he was just hurt or something? (My profile pic depicts him as a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins I haven’t yet, but I should soon!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins so when Hemlock “properly introduces” Leo and Cross…….do you think she’ll hate her father at first for a while, or will she forgive him pretty early on?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins ouch, sounds like it must’ve hurt then
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins There’s one thing about Hemlock telling Leo the news that you’d have to put in the story beforehand.
If she’s with him, he’s most likely already experimenting on Crosshair, and shows him to her while he’s locked up (or being tortured….😬……sounds like Hemlock to do that though). Since the Empire confiscated his armor when they…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins forgot about Hemlock haha
he’d actually be perfect for it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins I sure do!!
Ok, before we get to Leo’s reaction, we should probably talk about the reveal itself. Who tells her? Crosshair himself? Varian saying something along the lines of “I’m the only one who cares about you! Your mother obviously didn’t care, and look where your father is now!” Perhaps Rampart, trying to convince her to go…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins oh btw, how long does it take to do drawing like those ones of Leo? I draw a lot of human characters, but it usually takes me at least an hour or so to do one, especially if they aren’t wearing a helmet and I have to do all their facial features.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins me too. That would make her about six inches shorter than him.
Apparently I got my math wrong, too, and he’s 193 centimeters, not 183….lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins I’d love to see it once you’re done.
How tall is she compared to him? (My Clone Wars guidebook says he’s 183 centimeters, or six feet four inches.)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins nice!!! Great job drawing.
Also, I love how she has a toothpick in her mouth, just like her dad.
You should draw them together next.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year ago
@evelyn-collins yeah I might use it as my reference image for if I ever draw her
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