@evelyn-collins
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins wow so cool!! Markus and Buck belong to Tech and Hunter, respectively?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins yes please!!!
hmm……Well, she could steal one of those datapads. No doubt they have maps. Or maybe she could threaten a droid into telling her……”Don’t alert anyone or I’ll dismantle you!! I’ve had practice! Now tell me where the prisons are!” That kinda thing.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins pictures are back up so you can post fan art for your characters now!
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hi… I’m back! in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 1 week ago
oh yeah, timelines make writing fanfics so hard 😭
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TheLoonyOne started the topic Hi… I’m back! in the forum Start HERE 9 months, 1 week ago
@loopylin @keilah-h @ava-blue @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @freedom @euodia @folith-feolin and everyone else…
Um… hi 👋
It’s been like a solid year since I’ve been on here regularly, but I’m back!! 👉👈😬😅 I just had a wonderful mix of school, life, regular busyness, and of course the ever terrible writers block. But I’m starting to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. posted an update 9 months, 3 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @rae @highscribeofaetherium @trailblazer @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @koshka @kyronthearcanin @evelyn-collins @whoever-else-I’m-forgetting
I’m going on a two-week cruise tomorrow!! Which means I’ll be disconnected from the Internet for the most part. Y’all can still tag me in stuff,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
@evelyn-collins ohhh ok!!
I won’t give you any spoilers 😉
hmmmm……IDK. I’ve run out of suggestions lol, I guess just look back at my old ones…..
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months ago
@evelyn-collins heyy! Been working on the story any, or are still a bit stuck on it?
also WE’VE GOT ONE MORE EPISODE TO GO!!! I can’t imagine how it’s gonna end, but I’m terrified for the boys cause I know someone is gonna die.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins Really?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins oooh I just read what you wrote recently! The plot is thickening lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@evelyn-collins it’s in the same genes that control the gray hair and sniper eyes XD
seriously though, I do a lot of things like my dad, and my mom says it really is in our blood since he and I have the same blood type
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@evelyn-collins was just reading the latest bit of your story!
tbh I love how you wrote Leo being annoyed at the bird flying outside her window lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
@evelyn-collins ooh, this is gettin’ good!
one little edit though–Emerie introduced herself twice??? maybe rework that scene so she doesn’t say her full name until Leo asks for it.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
well, I had some ideas if you flip back a page or two
Want me to repost them or are you ok with looking for them?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins yeahh that makes a lot of sense!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins ooh, another idea I had….
Maybe this last flashback was a dream? And when she’s dreaming about it, something happens that didn’t happen when she actually did it. She wakes up and wonders why her brain went to that when it clearly didn’t happen in her memories, then realized it was a dream. That sets up her being on the Imperial ship.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins all righty!
Ideas (You can take or leave any of them):
- Leo awakes imprisoned on a starship in hyperspace, Crosshair guarding her. She is going to confront him, but he’s called away before she can really get anything out of him, or some other stormtroopers take her away or something. They take her on an Imperial shuttle to…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins I don’t think so. I was just asking what you needed help with. Sorry about being so blunt lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins what do you need help with?
oh also I probably can’t post links here right now (they’re affected in the same way as pictures probably) but I found this hilarious short video of the actor for the clones messing around with with Hunter, Wrecker and Crosshair action figures and doing all their voices. It was so funny.
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Keilah H. posted an update 11 months, 4 weeks ago
@lydibug @whalekeeper Once you’re done with The Bad Batch, you two should check out @evelyn-collins ‘s awesome fanfiction of it! I think you probably will have to watch through at least the first two seasons in order to get a bit of the story, but it’s really fun to read.
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Cool! Have fun!!
Enjoy yourself! Safe travels 🙏
Have a good trip!
That sounds like so much fun!! Enjoy!! 😊
Have fun!