@evelyn-collins
Active 2 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
@evelyn-collins lol plot work never works for me either
I’d love to see what you’ve got if you have a story structure or something! Seeing the whole plot laid out might help me give you feedback on where you could go next.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
@evelyn-collins cool, I look forward to seeing it!
(probably a good idea to at least finish draft one though lol, but hey, I’m also guilty of starting a second draft without finishing the first)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
@evelyn-collins personally, I didn’t think it was too slow! it was fine to me.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months, 1 week ago
@evelyn-collins heyyyy I noticed your fanfic now says “Draft One.” Are you already working on a second draft? Can I see it yet or is it off limits?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@evelyn-collins lol tagged ya on the forum and also said I’ll repost it if I have to.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@evelyn-collins here! It’s on page 128, I tagged Freedom, Smiley and Shadow, and the link is hidden in the words “here it is”. I can also repost it if you’d like.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@evelyn-collins I’ve been doing good!! Been writing a fanfic (It’s not Star Wars but it’s a sci-fi, I have it up in the fan fiction chat if you’d like to see it), and also playing some Minecraft and this game series called World Of Goo. There are two games and I’ve beaten both of them.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@evelyn-collins Oh I did? LOL I don’t remember that, but ok!
shame you got sick but hey, at least you have free time to learn to write Crosshair’s personality!
also, it’s ok if he’s a little off character, considering we have no idea how he’d react to having a daughter that’s been separated from him for pretty much about her entire existence.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@evelyn-collins ikr?
also here’s a fanfic tip: Wanna learn how to write Crosshair correctly? Learn his mannerisms. Get inside his gray-haired, burn-scarred head. Re-watch Bad Batch, every scene with Crosshair. If you’re allowed to do so, I’m pretty sure you can find YouTube videos that’s like “Bad Batch but only when Crosshair is on screen” or…[Read more]
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Evelyn collins replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Relatable!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@evelyn-collins lollll you just can’t make that kinda stuff up can ya?
People mispronounce my name all the time, or they hear it before they read it and then spell it as “Kayla.” I got used to it a long time ago XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@evelyn-collins yeah I get that, it’s just how it is sometimes…
also, believe it or not, I have been called Eveln in real life face to face with someone, along with just about a hundred other much less accurate names, including Nora… for half a year.
How does someone make that mistake?? LOL
if you have any other questions about your s…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic It's been a while in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@evelyn-collins blahhh messed up your tag
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins wow so cool!! Markus and Buck belong to Tech and Hunter, respectively?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins yes please!!!
hmm……Well, she could steal one of those datapads. No doubt they have maps. Or maybe she could threaten a droid into telling her……”Don’t alert anyone or I’ll dismantle you!! I’ve had practice! Now tell me where the prisons are!” That kinda thing.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 2 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins pictures are back up so you can post fan art for your characters now!
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TheLoonyOne replied to the topic Hi… I’m back! in the forum Start HERE 6 months ago
oh yeah, timelines make writing fanfics so hard 😭
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TheLoonyOne started the topic Hi… I’m back! in the forum Start HERE 6 months ago
@loopylin @keilah-h @ava-blue @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @freedom @euodia @folith-feolin and everyone else…
Um… hi 👋
It’s been like a solid year since I’ve been on here regularly, but I’m back!! 👉👈😬😅 I just had a wonderful mix of school, life, regular busyness, and of course the ever terrible writers block. But I’m starting to…[Read more]
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Keilah H. posted an update 6 months, 3 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @rae @highscribeofaetherium @trailblazer @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @koshka @kyronthearcanin @evelyn-collins @whoever-else-I’m-forgetting
I’m going on a two-week cruise tomorrow!! Which means I’ll be disconnected from the Internet for the most part. Y’all can still tag me in stuff,…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic my star wars Fanfic in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 months, 3 weeks ago
@evelyn-collins ohhh ok!!
I won’t give you any spoilers 😉
hmmmm……IDK. I’ve run out of suggestions lol, I guess just look back at my old ones…..
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Cool! Have fun!!
Enjoy yourself! Safe travels 🙏
Have a good trip!
That sounds like so much fun!! Enjoy!! 😊
Have fun!