@evelyn-collins
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@godlyfantsy12 @felicity @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6
You asked for it!! XD
Chapter 17
Everton delivered one more punch and moved to the door next to him. He shoved the key in the keyhole and whipped open the door. There stood Amidala. She laughed. “How in the world?”
Ev just smirked. “I’ll tell you later. Come on. We need to…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
Ok… I cannot pick my fave out of all those character name meanings!! XD I love them all!!!!
I really like the sound of the name Jareth!!
Yes! Aubrey is a really pretty name!!
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Esther replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
I like those names, but I really like the titles of your books!!!
I love the meaning of Christopher!! Christ-bearer. I didn’t know it meant that!
And Cara!
From what I’ve seen from looking around on the forum, all the meanings of your charries’ names really line up with their personality. Except Novem…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
I’m glad you all are getting interested and curious! That means I’m doing something right! 😊
I haven’t actually had to deal with the pronouns thing much, but I think capitalized is good. Kind of like how we type God instead of god, to signify we aren’t just talking about any god of any culture, but our God.
Yeah! Thx ὄ…
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Esther replied to the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @felicity
Funny, Jonathan and Theodora are siblings and their names mean the same thing!)
That’s awesome!! The rest of your character meanings are really cool!!
The meaning for Elissa is my fave too!!
I really like the name Carmen!!
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Esther started the topic Character Name Meanings in the forum Characters 3 years, 8 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @godlyfantasy12 @felicity @arien @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @theloonyone @folith-feolin @whalekeeper @queen_of_alvastia @starofthenorth @anyone-else @anyone-i-forgot-to-tag )I think I got everybody I could think of)
Alrighty! That took forever. Anywho, I really like picking names for my charries that have…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Is KP down? in the forum Questions and Support 3 years, 8 months ago
Same here
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
I’m so glad you’re hooked!! 😄 (I’m actually getting close to the end of what I have in my doc, so I guess I need to write more. 😅 😁)
I always capitalized pronouns referring to God because it seems respectful and reverent. It’s not just any he/him we’re talking about. It’s the ultimate He/Him!
Great way to put it!!
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
Oh, and don’t mind the weird format on the memory portion. It kind of got messed up when I copied and pasted.
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Esther replied to the topic My WIP!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 8 months ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @felicity
It’s been a few days, and here are the next chapters!
Chapter 15
Everton sat in silence as the bus rumbled down the road. He stared out the window and couldn’t stop thinking about his parents. Why did they have to find him? He left for a reason. He closed his eyes for a mom…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h
“Is anyone else starving?” Amidala asked.
Actually, Ev said that. 😅 My bad.
Everton
Ev laughed at the girl’s reply. “Then let’s find some!” He announced. “But first… who are you all?”
Amidala
Ami tried not to make eye contact with anybody, despite the fact that they we…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago
Is that going to be one of your New Year resolutions?😅
Most likely! 😁
I love those pics/mood boards and story ideas!! Evert0n is so cute XD.
Thx!! Lol Now you understand where Ami’s coming from when she says she likes him. 🤣
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Esther replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago
@arien @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings
Yes!! I love Jocelyn and Bryce too!! Not one word of their story had been written, but hopefully it will soon… in 2023… sometime… then… 😑😅😁
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 8 months ago
@loopylin @theloonyone @lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h
Amidala
Only a short moment after seeing the new boy, a girl with blond hair ran up and wrapped her arms around his neck, greeting him with joy.
They conversed for a little bit, until the girl turned to face Ami. “Oh! Sorry to interrupt you two, what’s your nam…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago
I love that!!!
I hope they do put it in the livestream! Then, if I’m watching it, I’ll be like “I know who did that!” 😂
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Esther replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago
I actually got the idea from a KP article!
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Esther replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago
@felicity
Awesome!!!
Actually, conflict in the book is mainly caused by their sibling rivalry. Like… It gets more than just teasing.
But in the end things straighten out… I think. 😁😁 -
Esther replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago
Thx!! 😊
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Esther replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago
And the book moodboard. (Sry for all the spamming 😅) (I promise I’m done now 😁)

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Esther replied to the topic Anyone else love Moodboards/Aesthetics? in the forum Art 3 years, 8 months ago

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