Evelyn collins

@theloonyone

It’s no problem! though, I have been stuck and could use some constructive criticism.

(and for future reference, I have completely abandoned timelines)

Yeah, I’m still stuck 😭

I just don’t know how to practically move forward.

and I’m still on no screens, so I haven’t seen past the 6th episode

Yeah, I had that much, but it’s what happens after, and what leads up to her plan and escape

Thx!!! I’m actually super stuck rn 😅

for real. idk why, but I just needed to write that. the hate of the avian creatures is hereditary.

to be honest, I didn’t even notice I did that. Recently I’ve been writing in a half-dazed state :p.

I shall fix this error! also, tbh, I’m seriously stalling. I’m so scared to write Hemlock.

Yeah, that makes sense! And I’ll go check it out 😁

@keilah-h I am in need of your assistance once again!!!

I am finally at the part where she meets Hemlock, but I have no IDEA what to do!!

Cool!!

Noice!!

YO!!!!

Ooooo!!!! Maybe she sees Crosshair in the black armor and is like “🫥 wut theh kriff?”

just moving forward as always, plus I am still soooo lost on how imma write the Hemlock scene

Ur good 😁!! Just moving forwards as always!

Noice!!!was there a message before that? bc if so, it didn’t cone through

@keilah-h my dear friend!!! I am in rather desperate need of help brainstorming as usual!!:)

Yeas!! i was sooooo happy!

Have you seen all the new episodes yet?!!

yes, she is being taken to Tantiss base.

still working on why Hemlock would tell her Crosshair is her father.

lots of things are still in the works….

if you have any more questions or suggestions, I’m open!!

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