@evangelinatroy_rose
Active 9 years, 4 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Daeus replied to the topic Comedy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
It’s like cloudy with a chance of meatballs only without the clouds and meatballs and a lot more sinister.
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Daeus replied to the topic Middle Troubles in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
No, to do that to the poor guy. But yes, of course I was talking about my sporadic sense of humor. It is so much more unusual to say it with that intention. It helps with my fake character development.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Middle Troubles in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
What?! That you make me laugh???
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Comedy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
AAAAAACK! Help! Attack of the killer elbow noodles!
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Daeus replied to the topic Comedy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
Macaroni that has a soft spot for evil scientists.
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Daeus replied to the topic Middle Troubles in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
*Sobs of ocean depths* Kate! How could you suggest such a thing!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Comedy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
Building off of your idea, @Hope… an evil baron with an allergy to broccoli.
A brilliant leader obsessed with spaghetti.
An evil scientist who has a soft spot for frogs and macaroni.
A weak, timid protagonist who has an uncontrollable affinity for any and every reptile in existence.
Something along those lines? You’re right— that would be…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Middle Troubles in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
You make me laugh so hard, Daeus. 😀
Well Hope, my idea is similar to Daeus’s, but I’ll post it anyway. What if the dad was taken (for whatever reason— trying to save Anna maybe as Daeus suggested) and they experimented with their (or Daeus’s) new Enigma thing on the dad.
Maybe there were problems they needed to clear up about their new and…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Middle Troubles in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
Here’s what I’m thinking. So there’s gonna be this part where they have to hold off the attacking forces until the resistance can completely formulate. So this already sounds like a difficult task. Let’s make it epic. Let’s say that at the same time, the gov. comes out with a new and top secret version of Enigma with far more powerful and…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Middle Troubles in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
I might be able to give you a couple ideas, but I need to ask you first, what is the theme of your story? Also, (without giving too much away) what is the climax of your story?
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Daeus replied to the topic Comedy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
I don’t think every rule of serious, emotional writing is completely irrelevant, but most of them are. Actually, to take my comedic piece for an example, it is totally possible to write a comedy that is serious and emotional and still have the focus be on comedy. Comedy generally results when people are serious or emotional about the wrong things…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Comedy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
Caricature’s the word then, hm? Caricature and exaggeration. 😉
So in the case of comedy (correct me if I’m wrong) every rule of serious, emotional writing is completely irrelevant.
Let me give an example.
Let’s say we have a male protagonist who’s afraid of the dark. If he gets shut in a dark cellar in a serious, realistic novel, he’ll be…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Comedy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
Kate,
You pretty much just said everything I would have said if I actually said everything I wanted to say. Caricatures. That is exactly what I was going to say. Caricatures are the essence of comedy.
There is absolutely no limit to how much you can exaggerate people and situations. One of my favorite comedies is the movie “The Hudsucker…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Comedy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
Thanks guys! I haven’t glanced over those links yet, Amanda, but I will when I find time. I’m a little short of that… 😛
Those are some great tips, Daeus! I’d not thought of it like that before… situation mattering as much as character… hm…
What about exaggerating characters? How far can you (should you) go? Are there rules, or does…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Comedy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
Great topic. I’m surprised we haven’t got to it yet.
Do you write one novel a month or something?
I must confess, I’ve only written one comedic piece in my life, but that one piece taught me a lot about writing comedy. Writing comedy is much different from being funny personally. What I discovered is that writing comedy is mostly about the…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy started the topic Comedy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 9 months ago
Okay, so I’m putting this in the novel ideas forum because I have a novel idea that happens to be a comedy. 😉
Up until now, I’ve only written very serious, intense, realistic stuff, but I want to try something different.
So I was wondering if anyone here has any tips on writing comedy.I’m generally a pretty comedic person, but when it comes to…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Names in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 9 months ago
Oh my goodness @Rolena! So tragic! 😉
All of those sound pretty creative to me, @Ivy-Rose. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Character Names in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 9 months ago
Bedfordshire England
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Daeus replied to the topic Character Names in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 9 months ago
@rolena-hatfield Haha, I’m really not sure. Of course, I have a general idea of what it sounds like. The thing is that just about any pronunciation of those letters would fit his character just about perfectly. My mom studied french, so I asked her. She wasn’t able to give me a definite answer though. So I have a pretty good idea, but I don’t…[Read more]
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