Karina Sanchez

Ooo, I like it @zoe-wingfeather! Like other people noted, I would watch out for info-dumping. For example, the writing in bold below, to me is a bit info-dump-ey…I struggle with the same thing, by the way. 🙂

I sigh. Work is so boring. I’m a secretary for a big computer company, and pretty much all I do all day is file papers.

The story is r…[Read more]

*nudges topic with tip of boot* This thing needs to wake up.

‘I stared disinterestedly over the top of the bar at the empty judge’s chair, drumming my fingers and trying to look cool and in control. Didn’t matter that my palms were sweating like pigs, and I was three shades whiter than a snake’s belly beneath my arrogant facade. Keep your act…[Read more]

That… is hilarious, @hope. One of my go-to games when I’m babysitting my siblings and they start getting rowdy is ‘castle’— each child is elected by popular vote to fill the place of jester, knight, queen, prince, king, etc. Once we’ve got everyone assigned their roles, we play battle or banquet or coronation some other such castley thing.…[Read more]

Ighhhh… forgot the tag @writefury

Whoops… missed this! Sorry! 😛

‘The first thing I noticed was the chandelier. Odd, since I didn’t have one in my room. Last time I checked, at least… which was when I fell asleep last night. Of course, it had been dark… but I was pretty sure to have noticed that thing in my room last night, considering it almost touched where the floor…[Read more]

Haha yes @bluejay, believe it or not I knew that! So fun! 😀

That should be blasted through the internet or something. Maybe put on a blimp.

Haha! I love it @writefury 😛

OW that made me laugh so hard! Every single one of those— yes!!!!!!! They’d totally not be missed! 😛

Oh, that’s great @writefury. Just great. Especially love this line:

And the woman in adventures who’s tough as any guy,
To fill the spot of “strong female” . . . or at least another try.

Spot on. 😀

Sounds good to me, @anna-brie! 😀

@anna-brie

Sure, that’s a very effective and popular thing to do.

Perfect @anna-brie! Sounds like you did great putting Christianity at the core of your story. 🙂

@kate-flournoy
Yep

*two thumbs up* 😉 😛

@writefury

Ugghhhh… that is like the tenth time I’ve almost written your tag as literally atwritefury. 😛

*pokes topic*

I’ve got something new to say on this. So… *shouts into megaphone* WAKE UP EVERYBODY AND PUT YOUR THINKING CAPS ON!!!!

Thank you. Glad to have secured your attention.

It’s a very simple point, actually, and more on the specific discussion of actual character conversions than Christian fiction in general, but I thought it was…[Read more]

Yes, it does @reaganramm! Thank you! 🙂

Ah— hahaha, I didn’t catch that actually. 😛 Nice. XD