@evangelinatroy_rose
Active 9 years, 4 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Scene critique (hi, it's me again) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 5 months ago
I don’t think I’m allowed to pass the motion myself, as the nominee… Here @Daeus, here’s my gavel. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Scene critique (hi, it's me again) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 5 months ago
@Rolena-Hatfield *lowers head contritely* I shall keep my screams to myself. 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Thanks for joining along @rolena-hatfield. I actually got 1,700 words edited so I’m really pleased. I’m sure I wouldn’t have been so focused if I didn’t know you were working with me. Did you get your scene finished?
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@rolena-hatfield Hey, sounds great.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@rolena-hatfield Oh Jolly! I love mornings. I guess that will probably be till 11 my time. Well here we go.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Am going to try to write till about 11:30. If you wan’t to join in, just tag me.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Inspirational Songs and Music Videos in the forum Music 10 years, 5 months ago
This music video is one of my favorites just because it’s so sweet— Story of my Life.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@Bluejay Unfortunately, late nights don’t work well with my schedule, especially since I’m generally in bed by then. Gotta get that sleep to write well.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Things I'm learning in my self-edit in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
YES. Bingo. Perfect. That is one hundred percent what I’m talking about @Daeus.
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Daeus replied to the topic Things I'm learning in my self-edit in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Very good points @kate-flournoy
I love that term, “The inside joke technique” That should be official terminology. It’s a wonderful trick. I do it sometimes, but I should really do it a lot more. It’s profoundly dickinsonian, but it doesn’t have to be plagiarism. I think it can be done in fewer words then he used but greater power.
Now here’s…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Scene critique (hi, it's me again) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 5 months ago
*screams* @Daeus WHAT!?!?
😉 😉 😉 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Things I'm learning in my self-edit in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Yes @Daeus! Totally! The only thing is, you have to watch out for redundant flow:
He raked his fingers nervously through his hair. “So, this is just like the first one, only more complicated?”
She nodded. “Yup.”
He exhaled loudly. “Right.”
Her lips twisted in a little smile. “You okay?”
He swallowed. “Yeah. Yeah, just great, thanks.”See, it’s…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Scene critique (hi, it's me again) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 5 months ago
@kate-flournoy Yes, splendid idea.
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Daeus replied to the topic Art Work in the forum Art 10 years, 5 months ago
@christi-eaton Where did you get the link from?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Scene critique (hi, it's me again) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus aw man, in that case I should have pounded it completely off and then asked you how it felt! 😛 *starts looking around for gavel* Now where did I put that thing? 😉
Love it, @writefury! Love it love it love it! I agree with Daeus— that one line
There. I can’t even see it anymore. I’ll be fine.
is awesome. And you’re right— tha…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Art Work in the forum Art 10 years, 5 months ago
Wow, yeah that really is amazing! I guess you both really like animals, huh?
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Daeus replied to the topic Art Work in the forum Art 10 years, 5 months ago
Success! I need to go celebrate. Where’s a fifty gallon tub of ice cream?
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Daeus replied to the topic Art Work in the forum Art 10 years, 5 months ago
Oh, wow! It worked. So you can use the link to a Facebook image too. Let me try twitter.

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Daeus replied to the topic Art Work in the forum Art 10 years, 5 months ago
To post images, I believe need to have a link to the image (at least I know of no other way). click the “img” button and insert the link for the image and then click ok. You now have an image. The only way I know to get a link for an image is to upload it to your media file on a wordpress site. You can then click on the image in…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Scene critique (hi, it's me again) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 5 months ago
There. I can’t even see it anymore. I’ll be fine.
Genius! Histarical
Suddenly, Gilligan barked loudly, standing up from his dog bed and walking over to the door. Jean and Jazz looked over as he barked again.
Can you not say suddenly? Sometimes it’s ok, but here it takes away all the suddenness.
“What?” Jazz turned in his chair so he could s…
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