Karina Sanchez

Well Hannah, I guess it’s good recycling – use what you have to the best of your ability.

@bluejay Sorry to say, but I just realized that I won’t be available tonight. Tomorrow should be good though.

@jadamae Perfect timing actually. I just finished my chapter and I realized I have to do some research before the next one.

@kate-flournoy Tricks. I wondered about that. I like tricks when I do them. But when there done to me … harrumph!

Don’t say any more.

@Daeus you won’t be. Things are not always as they seem… and even someone as simple and straightforward as Boffin can have a few tricks up their sleeve. 😉

I can’t say anymore. Finish the book.

@jadamae Sounds great.

I’m going to be writing till about 11:30 if anyone wants to join.

@writefury Wonderful poem! I like it. 🙂

@kate-flournoy. Well good. I guess. I’m still mad at Dickens for doing this to me, but I guess as long as I’m not mad at the end of the book it will be ok.

@Daeus… *mysterious smile* You’ll be very glad to hear that your outrage is totally for nothing. Finish the book. Believe me. I know why this happened— but in the end you figure it out. Don’t worry. You don’t need to be mad at Dickens.

Finish the book.

*eats cookie too*

@bluejay 328

*Doesn’t wait to be told* Ready. Set. Go!

Oooooh *excited whisper* cookie cookie cookie… I love da cookie…

@bluejay

What they said @writefury. 🙂

And I love this— it’s a classic example of everything I cannot do. It’s simple but powerful, cute but touching, and above all lean and to the point. Excellent work!

@writefury I would change a couple little things, but not much. The best thing about this poem is that it really personalizes the boat. *adds boat as friend on Facebook* Oh, and also the rhyme (I love rhyme).

Here are the little tweaks I would make:

And wood deck a sheen

Sounds strange. Decks are not sheen, they have a sheen.

As darker clouds…

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@spradlin Coffee’s one thing, but coffee and chocolate…that’s even better. 😉