Karina Sanchez

Bah. It didn’t work. Well, you can see one of them here if you want to. Unfortunately, I don’t have the other one online currently.
http://www.thescratchingquill.com/the-cloud-and-earth/

@bluejay Yeah, I like it. Focusing on symbolism could make it even better, but it’s good.

Actually though, I wouldn’t call this one visual poetry. Visual poetry is where you write a normal poem, but the way the words are arranged forms an image. For instance, you could write a poem about your ancestors in the shape of a tree. Your one about the…[Read more]

@bluejay Yeah, I like it. Focusing on symbolism could make it even better, but it’s good.

Actually though, I wouldn’t call this one visual poetry. Visual poetry is where you write a normal poem, but the way the words are arranged forms an image. For instance, you could write a poem about your ancestors in the shape of a tree. Your one about the…[Read more]

@bluejay The Home> Forums> General Site info> Questions How To: Subscribe is for navigation purposes. For instance, general site info is a subcategory of the forum, so it is listed after it. Those are links. I don’t know why it says subscribe at the end of that navigation sequence. It’s just black text for me. No link. Doesn’t do anything. In any…[Read more]

*tries to communicate**finds no phone**pouts*

@Dragon-Snapper

@Bluejay this is really interesting. I’ve never read a poem quite like this before, but I like it. Nothing really to point out. Great job.

Okay great @Bluejay. I got 1,020 words written, and I was working on a dream-sequence, so I’m pretty happy. 😛 Those are kinda tricky. 😉

What did you get, @Dragon-Snapper? *folds claws primly* I didn’t waste my time melting up the plastic seats, dear fellow dragoness.

Oh, well in that case… um… eh… for gentleness…compassion on the wounded? Healing in your hands?
And for self-control… um… disciplined wisdom? Rule over your spirit?

@Bluejay

Sorry @Bluejay I’m stuck. The ones you have sound good. What’s wrong with them?

Daeus’ secretary would like to post on the cork board that he doesn’t write on Sundays either. If you would like to write with him, please check in on weekdays or Saturdays prior to about 5 pm EST. Thanks.

–My Secretary

@Bluejay, actually, I can!! Ready, set go! When will you be writing till? I can write until nine our time, like usual.

@bluejay Wow, great poem! I love the shape of it, too. Great work!

Ok. New statement. He is my all time favorite villain ever.

@Daeus I think it’s safe to say I concur. And even if it isn’t… I concur.

@bluejay You’ve done visual poetry!!!! (I love visual poetry)

I think it’s great.

@kate-flournoy OOOOH, the mask thing was perfect.

Ok. New statement. He is my all time favorite villain ever.

I — I…

…I need to watch that again.

OH MY GOODNESS SOMEBODY ELSE FEELS LIKE I DO!!!!!!!! Seriously, I’d given up hope.

Seriously, he might just be my all time favorite villain ever.

I concur. Most vehemently. With everything you said. Don’t let me start ranting; I’ll never finish.

One other clever thing they did with him (though it doesn’t have much to do with his character) is…[Read more]

Yes, the characters were over the top. That’s why I liked it so much. Not only were they well rounded, but they played off each other so well.

@dragon-snapper As Daeus’ personal secretary, I should tell you that Daeus usually writes a lot on Saturdays, but doesn’t write on Saturday nights.

@hope I like that version. Nice balancing of length and depth. I might just change a couple tiny things.

What else could he expect with it repeated in his nightmares…

A quest he never imagined offers him that chance.

Weigh down on his mind.

hovers just out of reach — the promise of the word…