@evangelinatroy_rose
Active 9 years, 3 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Daeus replied to the topic Another Book Cover! in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
@leumeister My main thought is to accent the stars more. First of all, it looks like their focal point is on the title. I’m not an expert, but my impression is that a better focal point would be between the spaceship and the title. Also, I would make the light streams from the stars a lot more prominent. It would add motion and also draw eyes…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Another Book Cover! in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
Excellent font choice, by the way. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Another Book Cover! in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
@Leumeister I love the title, though it might be a little too metallic to show up well against your background, and as far as I can tell with your experimental models, the actual cover looks like it’ll be well laid out. It does seem a bit too dark though, and besides that maybe a little uniform. There’s nothing really eye-catching about the cover…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus I like it. A lot. I would tend to agree that the silver subtitle does look best.
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Daeus replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
Ok, this is what we’re at now. I personally like it with the silver subtitle better, but I’m thinking it might be good to make the name gold. (There’s now a shadowed effect on the title like you said, @emma-flournoy) Any thoughts?


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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic I need a character name! Help! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
Oops @Ethryndal *ducks head* But I thought it was good she even had an idea, considering she’d had writer’s block for a long time?
And that’s true what you said about forcing names. I’ve never done that, but I’ve had to change names before, and let me tell you it was not fun. I referred to her as Lily for months after I changed it, just cuz it…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Computers, and the opinions on them ~The KP forum in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Well, it’s a well-known fact that macs beat everything, but at the same time, if all you do is write, then there’s no need to be picky. I won’t be offended if you get a windows.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic I need a character name! Help! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@S-G-Dewey hm, I’m best with wayyyy older names, but I shall see what I can think of… Francis. William. Laurence. Alexander. Oliver. Douglas. Richard. Martin. George.
I’ll let you know if I think of anything else…And congratulations on defeating your writer’s block! *cheers*
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Daeus replied to the topic I need a character name! Help! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
Digney. Er, that’s the first thing that came to mind, but I completely invented it.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Discussion for Video Two: The Importance of Theme in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 7 months ago
Same here. For me, life IS the story, and since life without Christ is not complete, it stands to reason a story without Christ is not complete either. So it’s a matter of learning to see reality through the correct lens and put it down just as it is— death, life, despair, hope, sin, God, and everything! 😀
And I’m currently feeling like all my…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus I’m late, but the gold title definitely works better.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Plotting the interminable. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus *groans* Tell me about it. 😛
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Daeus replied to the topic Plotting the interminable. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@hope Anything helps. God bless.
But actually, that point that individual book plot points may sometimes line up with the overall plot points is very helpful.@kate-flournoy 😀 You haven’t gone green in a while. And it’s funny because I can’t think of anything you might have read that would have caused it. It feels like I did, but now I don’t…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
@emma-flournoy That’s what I’m thinking. Say, do you think it might look better if the subtitle were gold too?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Plotting the interminable. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
if you have a 150,000 word novel, you should split it up into three 50,000 word novels
*stares at quote*
*turns bright green*
*screams*
Yah, we’re just gonna pretend we didn’t see that. 😛I actually don’t know all that much about trilogies, not having dealt with one myself, but the one piece of advice that’s coming to mind is make the middle…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Plotting the interminable. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Thanks, y’all. I’m thinking for my story I’m gonna have to write it mainly as one long story arc, but give each book a feeling of semi-completion.
@kate-flournoy @hope You two have thoughts on this, don’t you?
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Daeus replied to the topic Homework for Video 3: Discovering & Deepening Theme in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 7 months ago
@audrey-caylin That’s great! I’m so glad you’re finding it helpful. 🙂 If you ever have any questions about applying the lessons to your novel, we’ll be around.
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Daeus replied to the topic Panel Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@northerner Absolutely. Just to clarify, you are talking about building an audience for your books, right? I thought possibly you might be asking about branding — like presenting a consistent impression of yourself in everything you do, which is kinda related, but much more of a specific topic.
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Daeus replied to the topic Going Live in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@northerner Absolutely. You can submit your questions here: https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/panel-questions/ You should be able to use the same link for the event to access the recording later.
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Daeus replied to the topic Going Live in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@northener Absolutely. You can submit your questions here: https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/panel-questions/ You should be able to use the same link for the event to access the recording later.
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