Euodia

Well, to my joy, I am finding, so far, a LOT less things to edit than I thought I would…

…Though, I’m pretty sure anyone else who reads my work will be wanted to strangle me for grammar mistakes I missed and poor scene execution. I’m just blind to it.

@whalekeeper

Okay!

@ellette-giselle

What is Jonathan’s arc supposed to be?

@ellette-giselle

He’s slowly softening to the rebels, and becoming curious about their strength and hope. Also, he apologized.

I just watched Animation vs. Minecraft, and it was super wholesome, I loved it

@whalekeeper I get that lol. I’m pretty chill when it comes to Minecraft too.

…And here I am, praising the game and not talking about Alan Becker. XD I still haven’t watched. Next chance I get, probably this week.

I think some YouTubers make Minecraft way too loud and showy. My brothers watch competitive YouTubers and I’ve never caught on to that. The game by itself is much more impactful.

Minecraft is the kind of thing I never thought I’d enjoy. But one day it clicked. I think the combination of the music and graphics have the same uncanny feel as old memories. Pieces of the world make sense, but much of it is random and silent. It’s such a strange, melancholic feeling.

@highscribeofaetherium yeah, but again, those who aren’t familiar with Minecraft might not get it.

@ellette-giselle

Hey, I was right.

Good chapters. Jonathan’s arc is starting to turn around, yay! 😁 I liked the way you did that, and the ending of the last chapter.

@keilah-h

I mean The Nether through Cave Spider Rollercoaster kind of had a story, but it was more like crazy event after another as they tried to get back to the PC.

@highscribeofaetherium oh yeah I forgot about that. The third season is really the only one with a story.

@ellette-giselle really?

Guess sandbox games aren’t your thing then. (Sandbox=doesn’t really have a set story, you do whatever you want. Minecraft is that way cause you can choose to turn on hostile enemies and fight them every night, or you can just mine around. Or just turn on “creative mode” and have access to everything without having to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

The first two seasons are definitely not as good, but they’re also just supposed to be fun and developing the character’s personalities. They’re not intended to be as reliant on story.

If you haven’t ever played Minecraft I definitely  see how you might not have liked the first two (or fourth) seasons.

@ellette-giselle

 Just the whole minecraft stuff was driving me out of my mind. I felt like with that one he was relying more on the novelty of having his stick figures in a video game then his actual story.

Can’t say I agree. But maybe that’s cause I actually play Minecraft and know it inside and out. You said before you don’t play video games,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Because the King and Purple’s stories are amazing?

Did you not like it or did you just not find it sad?

@ellette-giselle

All of them? Including Noteblock Universe and The King?

@the_lost-journal

Writers can insert two sides of themselves into that conversation and it still tracks. XD

@elishavet-pidyon

I appreciate the thoughts! I hadn’t thought much about items before – although specific things come to mind. My goal is to make this character less of a person to mourn for, and more of a person to enjoy reading about. *Bows and offers you a jar of glitter to poof yourself back home if needed*