@ethryndal
Active 3 years, 2 months ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Jess replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
I’m going to be outlining/writing/staring-at-the-screen for an unknown amount of time, if anyone wants to join me 😛
@winter-rose, @dragon-snapper, @overcomer, @r-j-wordsmith, @ethryndal, @anybody who wants to join -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 1 month ago
@Ethryndal XD
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hey, Y'all! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 1 month ago
@Arella-Noreen I know Dallas, but I don’t really know where it is, so; yeah, you live somewhere in Texas! That’s fine, ’cause I wouldn’t know many other places there either. I think we were northeast TX.
@Ethryndal Yay!
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
Those are some good ideas, @kate-flournoy . I was thinking that I needed to either make the story more about the princess, or the peddler, and I started to go with the princess, which is why I cut out some at the end that talked about his life after the whole affair. However, what you wrote made me think about it some more, and I think the…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
@overcomer
I like this a lot! It has a very fairytale-ish feel (sorry for stealing your words, @ethryndal), which is what I’m sure you were going for. So nice job!
1. Try not to use parentheses as much as you do. Example:She plopped (rather ungraciously) back down on the divan and patted the spot next to her.
2. It might just be me but using the…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
Hey guys,
I’ve been working on this short story I wrote a while back, and I thought it might be a good idea before I get started on the next draft to ask for your opinions and see if any of you have ideas for improving it. (I’d really appreciate them!) 🙂
I wrote draft 1 1/2 recently and looking over it afterward, it occurred to me that it’s…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 1 month ago
Hey guys,
I’ve been working on this short story I wrote a while back, and I thought it might be a good idea before I get started on the next draft to ask for your opinions and see if any of you have ideas for improving it. (I’d really appreciate them!) 🙂
I wrote draft 1 1/2 recently and looking over it afterward, it occurred to me that it’s…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@winter-rose @daeus @overcomer @ethryndal @northerner @perfectfifths @kina-lamb @kate-flournoy @the-bean @hope @jane-maree @graciegirl @r-j-wordsmith @allthepeoples
I’m here! I’m here! I know it’s been a while, but I’m here now! -
Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
I’m calling it quits, too, @ethryndal . I’m feeling satisfied too. I added four more stanzas to a half-finished poem that had six. It needs a lot more work, but it’s getting there … slowly …
Thanks for writing with me! 🙂
By the way, you are welcome to borrow my deer anytime. I have plenty at home. 😉 (Seriously, they’re everywhere!)
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
That sounds great, @northerner ! Outlines are tough. (Not to write, really, but to be satisfied with.) 🙂
I’m still going, @ethryndal ! 🙂 I’m making some headway on my poem, so I’ll be at it a while longer …
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
Good for you, @daeus ! 🙂
Gaah! @ethryndal , that’s … that’s ………………….
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
Thanks, @ethryndal ! 🙂 😉 :/ The name just keeps getting longer …
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
Can I join you guys? 🙂 @Northerner @daeus @ethryndal
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Northerner replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@Ethryndal, do join the throng!
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
@dragon-snapper @ethryndal Both entries are sent and now all I have to do it wait… To quote Inigo Montoya, “I hate to wait….”
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Snapper replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 1 month ago
@ethryndal You beat me to it! 😛
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Tips for Writing Short Stories in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 1 month ago
So, excitement!
I just submitted my story to the Home Life contest and am currently waiting for a reply from the Bunyan contest people due to *ahem* technical difficulties (i.e. I put my email address in wrong D: )
So as soon as that can be fixed, the second story will entered as well 🙂
Thanks for everyone’s tips and support! Thanks you, Daeus…[Read more]
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 1 month ago
@ethryndal Cool! Thanks so much! 🙂 My problem was that I was putting a space in between them. 🙂
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 1 month ago
@ethryndal 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 1 month ago
@Ethryndal that is just tragical.
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