Ethryndal

@XonosDarkgrate are you a Rogue One fan???

@raevynstar
I think you could do one of two things. You could go with what @daeus said and make her completely confident in herself…or you could make her doubt herself and her abilities. Maybe she’s really insecure and doesn’t quite know who she is. Anyway, just some thoughts.

@Daeus yep. Nailed it.

@daeus – I.LOVE.IT. Bravo! 🙂

Have some ice cream:🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨

@Daeus I likey. 👍 😃

@Emily
I love that quote…and the lighthouse. 🙂

@Daeus *dashes in with thoughts* *realizes everyone else has already voiced her thoughts* *is slightly at loss for what to do* 😜

Only two things really stood out to me…
1. As Kate said, mentioning Jerrold in that fashion makes him sound more important to the plot than actually was. I mean, he was a TON important to Trev’s character arc and the…[Read more]

@Emily Neato! I know everyone’s kinda already said it but wowza that sunset. 😍 And the lighthouse is adorable. *really wants to climb it* 😜

I’m just gonna…let everyone else talk. My brain is fried…

@jess-penrose

Well, the version of a synopsis I know is a maximum of 10 page summary of a book that describes the plot, characters, message, world and the writer’s thoughts. Soooo… I assume these are slightly different things in Australia. That’s all.

That’s my definition of a synposis too…I mean, that’s a good reason for writer’s to hate…[Read more]

@daeus I agree about the last sentence/paragraph thing (and most of what the others said about rewording throughout). I don’t think the whole thing should be dumped, but particularly just the last sentence sounds sort of pushy and/or excluding or something along those lines. If you were to cut it, it might need replacing with something else, but I…[Read more]

@rolena-hatfield That’s great! It’s really cute. 😀

@raevynstar I must decline (way too much going on 😉 ), but I hope you get the help you need.

@raevynstar Cool. 🙂 I’m in Southern Ohio.

*scowls at technology in general* Sorry guys… if any of you have followed the link and been horribly confused, I tried to fix something backstage because one of my pages was acting up and I think I just made it worse. I’ll try to get it back up and organized as soon as possible.

@rolena-hatfield wellll… *glances around cautiously*
Okay, yes. Apparently my secret is out. I do have a blog. I’ve had it for a while; I just haven’t been able to be active on it yet. I went ahead and set it up for graphic design purposes, but I’m waiting to finish up the very lastest of my last extracurricular school projects before I start…[Read more]

@emily That sunset picture is pretty.

@rolena-hatfield I have a blog: http://www.thetinytealtypewriter.com Thanks for giving me the opportunity to share it. 😊

@emily Thank you! I’m very fond of attics myself 🙂

@lifeofkatie @seekjustice Yay! More bloggers coming out of the shadows! I will check them out!