Ethryndal

@inklings-for-christ I think that’s a fantastic idea! I probably won’t be able to chime in much, but otherwise, go for it. 😀

Trachea. That’s what my breath was caught halfway up.

Goodness. XD

@inkling-for-christ Well… ‘the baby squealed’ is telling what happened but it’s not emotional telling, which is what limits the story. Your second example is certainly more descriptive, but sometimes you’re not going to want that much detail or your story will be extremely long.

I would focus on the emotional telling, for example, you…[Read more]

I’m back. Seeing if I can do something with the DWN…

@aislinn-mollisong  @sam-kowal  @dragon-snapper @winter-rose @catwing

@that_writer_girl

He will forgo a lightsaber for the simplicity and tickling powers of a simple broom…

…when did we start calling him Broom Boy? What a sad nickname…

@that_writer_girl_99 They Rey/Kylo conflict and relationship was my favorite part, too. The moment in the throne room… my breath was caught halfway up my

@ethryndal That’s a really intriguing idea, about the Knights of Ren. It seems like either they would have to take over as main villains, or Episode 9 wouldn’t really have one, because Kylo…[Read more]

Heck yeah, Kylo and Rey! It doesn’t matter if you “ship” them or not, they were amazing. The fight between them and the Guards was my favorite part too.

…and yes. If something happens to poor Kylo Ren, I can assure you that I too will be severely enraged. @ethryndal

I think I’m signing off… the color is out *sighhhhh* *scratches table frustratedly*

@aislinn-mollisong  Sure! Good-bye! Say hi to Ariella for me 😉

@aislinn-mollisong  Hooray! I have colors, but they’re a bit faded. I have no plot in the KPA whatsoever yet 😛 But it’s moving forward……..

@aislinn-mollisong  KAPEEFER! Are you still here? I’m writing  🙂

Yeah. I love it. @ethryndal

What was your favorite part of the movie? Also, how many times have you seen it?

@ethryndal I’ve missed you.

I agree on the Knights of Ren thing. That’s a very cool aspect of the story that I think deserves more depth.

About the boy at the end…do you think maybe he serves a dual purpose? Perhaps he will be in the next movie, as a little apprentice? Or maybe he’s just symbolizing the rebirth of the Jedi Order? I dunno, but…[Read more]

I’m with @kate-flournoy here. Definitely recommend the course. It’s awesome. @daeus did a great job!

I’m here! I don’t remember if I’ve responded in depth to this thread…

Kylo Ren. and. Rey. Oh my word! Their whole arc throughout the movie was so cool. It was the reason I went back and saw the movie a second time.

@daeus  Congrats! That’s some great advice 🙂  How are you liking Pinterest so far?

@emily-d I really, really liked A Wrinkle In Time

It was  thoughtful, meaningful, almost spiritual, and it had a lot of intriguing symbolism and thing s like that. Open respect for Christianity, too, although it did mention there being good qualities in other religions.

Plus, Meg and Calvin are really great characters. Meg’s internal conflicts…[Read more]

@emily-d  *pursues* *growls ferociously*  …Just kidding ;P  I see what you’re saying about the weirdness and stuff. Personally, I like it because of the action, and because it was interesting seeing what Meg was learning.

I hear there’s a new movie coming out, so maybe that one will be better. Although, it’s a Disney movie, so… I don’t kn…[Read more]