Ethryndal

@rochellaine

Farewell 🙁

@jess-penrose

How’s your writing going?

@jess-penrose

Ah no, I don’t think she did. It was fun anyway though!

@jess-penrose 🙂

@catwing I have trouble with showing not telling as well, so much of my editing involves fixing it! You are not alone in this struggle!

@Rochellaine i don’t think we were supposed to, but Jess did and I liked my last line so I did too!

I hope your confusion lessens some time soon 🙂

@jess-penrose Yeah, I have trouble showing, not telling. 🙁
Maybe after I go through all these and get the revised doc to you. I’m revising it in a different doc. 🙂
Just wondering, did you think I needed to develop the characters more?

@rochellaine @seekjustice I have to go to bed. Good night.

@jess-penrose

My last line was:

above the din came Errol’s voice, but I could not distinguish his words from the rest of the chaos.

your last line is very interesting too 😉

@Rochellaine

Sorry, you’ll thank me one day though (or maybe not)

@jess-penrose @rochellaine

Me too! I got 375. How’d you guys go?

@jess-penrose @rochellaine

Ten minutes, sounds good!

@seekjustice Unfortunately I’m editing, so no Word War.
@jesspenrose Yes I’m curing all those zombies you pointed out. Thanks again. 🙂

@jess-penrose

Yeah, mate 😉

@catwing @jess-penrose @rochellaine

Would anyone like a word war???

@seekjustice It has. 🙂
@jesspenrose welcome! I’m finally going through those notes you left me. XP
@rochellaine *laughs* Oh that’s hard.

@Catwing cool! Its been ages since I’ve seen you 🙂

@seekjustice I’m editing Finding Secrets. 😛

@skredder @alia @Rochellaine @anyone

I’m writing? Would anyone like to join me?

@ariel-ashira Oh, double neatness!

@filewriterbase13x YAY! If you need more details tell me. 😀

Unfortunately my character has stolen my next part. Thanks Kay.

Part Six
In Deep Waters (Hello, reader people :P)

/I could’ve done better./ I stared at the old bearded man lying motionless on the ground. His friends watched where the Catwing and narrator had vanished. /The doctor was a nice touch. But this death is too dull and failable./ A…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira That sounds like him. 🙂
I just noticed our profile pictures are looking the same way. Neat? Not neat? 😀

@ariel-ashira

I personally don’t see a problem with it, but I will say that I see a destinction between non-Christian music and Popular music. I don’t listen to pop music because I don’t see it as uplifting, encouraging, God-honouring or entertaining, but I do listen to a lot of non-Christian music, such as musicals, because even when they aren’t…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira Perhapss I can make sense of half asleep writings because I have experience writing them. 😛
Will you look at that you signature finally loaded. XD