Esther

@esther-c

ahhhh, Cody’s “Tantono” sent such a warm feeling through my heart… that was so cute!! ❤️

[…] with a side of guilt for what she couldn’t quite figure out.

Hallie… you know why. don’t give me that.

“Can I kiss you goodnight?”

Excuse me? In front of her father’s house?? Uhm, absolutely not! lol kidding kidding

Just…[Read more]

@esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @rae @hybridlore @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol

and an extra aesthetic 👀

aka the villain’s aesthetic

@esther-c @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @rae @hybridlore @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol

MC Aesthetics for my fantasy WIP 🤭

MC #1:

@esther-c

Poor Hallie, hopefully her siblings don’t embarrass her (right?). Nice job, the chapters are good. One thing I did notice though is that in a couple of sentences you explain why a character is doing something, like “to ___” and I think you could leave that out sometimes for the reader to figure out why they’re doing something for themselves.

@koshka ZLATI AND VULKAAAA MY BABESSSSS!!!! I LOVE THEM SOBBBBB!!! I miss my RPing days of them with November and then later them with Pax

@esther-c those are so pretty!!

@esther-c

*Slips in* I’ve also met somebody who looks like one of your Hallie faceclaims. 😅 First moodboard, left, with the long red hair. It’s crazy how similar they look. I’ve had this thought since you started using the photo, but never thought to tell you for some reason.

@esther-c

I TOLD YOU I MET HER IN REAL LIFE!!!!!

Maybe all our writing has come to life and our characters are walking around in different places!! (sounds like a movie or something)

It could be kinda scary if some of my villains got loose. 😂

@esther-c

Lolollol.

Ready??!……. You’re not gonna believe it……….

Mexican.

@esther-c

Hey guess what?!?

I just ran into your character Hallie the other day!!! NO LIE! She looked EXACTLY like the face claim, she had the same personality from what I’ve read of your book!!!!

It was driving me crazy! She and her fiance were visiting our church and I grantee you I kept sneaking glances at her. She had on a black…[Read more]

@esther-c same….I reached a bit over 700 and kinda stopped ROFL I have another scene I should be writing but uhh…kinda lost steam XD

@esther-c ROFLLL Bruh frrr like freedom was on and I said hi and now she’s gone XD

@koshka @esther-c

I gotta work out exactly how Erich got into the US Army tbh😂🫣 I’m thinking it could’ve been a part of the offer for giving him a shorter sentence or something, but I gotta put more research into it

Or he just joined the Army after he had his sentence.

idk exactly yet. 😅 if I have to change things a bit I…

@koshka I am still here! @esther-c Hi!!

I am going to try and do some writing lol! How are yall?

sooo is anyone on rn?? XD @loopylin @keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed @esther-c

@esther-c ohhhh ok.

yeah idk if we’d like that, especially with roleplays and stuff.

I don’t even remember my reason for avoiding Discord so I might as well try it out if it comes to that.

@the_lost-journal aww cute!

It’s spelling “quacking” not “quaking” but that’s all right.

@esther-c @loopylin I’ve avoided Discord for as long as possible (I don’t even remember the reason why) but everyone keeps bringing up reasons that I should have it lol. Never heard of Slack.

@esther-c I like that idea.

We could also do Discord. It’s really great for organizing and customizing things. We could have different channels that are like the different topics, and we could even set up something similar to the Bumbling Henchman/ Chosen One/ ect. titles

@esther-c

Noooo, poor Tyler. 😭

“I’m not sure. I’ll have to discuss it with your dad first. Maybe we can talk about it during dinner.”

As much as Hallie hated to have a conversation like that over dinner in front of all her siblings

Hallie could feel the curious, snickering gazes of her five other siblings boring into the back of her head

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@trailblazer

Those are great ideas, thank you so much!! This is spurring a lot of ideas now, thanks.

@linus-smallprint

Understandable. Contemporary writing is kind of like writing set in the present or close to it, and are mainly based in reality.

@esther-c

Thank you for the suggestions, I’ll check them out! Okay, compelling characters seem…[Read more]