@esther-c
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
Aww I wish I had a friend like Lukas, he’s sooo sweet and adorable!!!!!!
Livia
Keep it together.
She took a deep breath, and tried to keep her tone even, yet get it out quickly before she fell apart.
“In the middle of the night, I got a text from my mani that Lucian, my chauffer was waiting outside to take me home, so I had to…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months ago
@grcr (you’re welcomeeee) @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @anyone-else-who-wishes-to-read
Dropping the second chapter!!!!
Cassian’s bare feet flew over the verdant carpet, effortlessly leaping over sticks and stones in his path.
In his small hands he held a branch, and he wielded it high as he pretended to gallop through the trees.
He was going t…
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Beth Torres replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
I also filled out the survey. Sorry, I know I didn’t help vote for the genre and stuff, but I’m finding this interesting. Lol.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
Oh, I submitted as well. Earlier.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
Submitted it, hopefully it makes sense
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HighScribe replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
Submitted it. I didn’t really think anything through at all, so I might have regrets later, but oh well.
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
Completed. Can’t wait to see how it comes out!
Quick question/suggestion: I’m assuming dual POV and single POV is about whether we have both characters be viewpoint characters or not. Maybe that should be a separate question from 1st/3rd person POV, because we could technically have a 1st person dual POV or a 3rd person dual POV, or…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
@esther-c Took the survey! Some of my answers might be a bit self contradictory, sorry XD
One question: are the two mcs going to be a couple, or can they be friends or siblings or something? Whatever’s fine with me, just wondering.
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
Livia
She turned her head away. She would not let Lukas see her cry.
“So you know how I just kind of disappeared for a few days there?” she paused. “Apparently it’s only been a couple days here, but in my world it’s been two weeks.”
Another silent tear slipped out of her eye, and she tried to hide behind the curtain of her blue hair.
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
I kind of scrolled back to page 307 in hopes of finding more Lukas and Livia scenes…and I came across this one.
And I kind of let myself imagine that Xandro wasn’t a horse, but a human.
So as you read this, just imagine that Xandro’s a person…
And then she felt a familiar warmth on the back of her neck.
“Xandro!” she turned aro…
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
I’m going to be casually stalking your profile until you write a Lukas RP….*maniacal laughter*
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 7 months ago
Oh yeah those parts were fun too!
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
Okay…I’m just gonna pretend that she had to leave the school for a family emergency to go back home, so she just now got back before the dance.
Livia
Liv gazed out the window, the familiar buildings already beginning to trigger memories. There was the mall where she and Lukas had hung out all day, the street where they’d taken…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
Noooo, Rikerrrrrr!!! Aghhh, from a writer’s perspective, yes, yes, yesss!! From a reader’s perspective, girlll nooooo.
I feel that😂😅😭
I haven’t seen all of season 4 yet, but spoil away. I don’t mind one bit XXD
I can see how Leon could feel that way too!!!
also…don’t you know one of the main themes of their trilogy is…[Read more]
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freedom posted a new activity comment 7 months ago
@trailblazer @thearcaneaxiom @keilah-h @esther-c Thank y’all so much💖💖 (and yesssss, reviews are so helpful, Esther!! Thank you so much, that means a lot more than you know✨🫶💖)
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 7 months ago
Yep. It wasn’t true to the book character. I none Christian with her personality might have said that but not Jo.
I didn’t mind the added dialogue and tangents but I don’t think they were historically accurate, and Amy from the books didn’t talk like that. The clothing wasn’t historically accurate either I don’t think, so I guess it…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
Yeah, probably.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Ultimate KP Novel in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 7 months ago
I have seen the 2019 little women!
In some sense, it was more book accurate. But the family shows no sign of being Christian, and the Christian sounding advice there mom gives them is cut out. And there’s the scene they added before Meg dies where Jo says “Jo’s will be done” when her sister questions if death is God’s will. I can’t…[Read more]
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