@emma-flournoy
Active 5 years, 1 month ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Alia replied to the topic Christmas Poem Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
Hold their hand and say ‘You aren’t alone’?Â
@seekjustice this is really good, from my opinion at least. One thing I would change though is in the above line. instead of saying “and say” I would take out the and so it would look like this: Hold their hand, say ‘You aren’t alone’?
I’ve only written a few poems, so my advice might not be the best t…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
@dekreel, why don’t I like Ten? @charisetter, you might want to come save her from the onslaught…
1. He isn’t careful 2. he is the doctor who forgot the war, thus acting like actions don’t have consequences 3. he cares more about impressing his companions than actually getting things done 4. he’s too silly, doesn’t take anything serious 5.he…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
@introvert_girl, welcome! By the way, your story sounds FANTASTIC!
@kate-flournoy, you’re over there cheering another INFP in this INFP infested site…so, think you could find another INTP for me?
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Alia replied to the topic Of Fairytales and Beta-readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 10 months ago
@kate-flournoy, I’ll get started on it tomorrow. today is hectic in my household…
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Alia replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
1. Arlia
2. Centaur
3. was raised in a herd in captivity until she and her brother escaped and became bandits.
4. Black hair and tail, green and blue eyes, horse part of the body is arabian and grey.
5. quick to pick a fight, loyal, distrustful, musical
6. she can talk to you inside your head, Galadriel style.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Of Fairytales and Beta-readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 10 months ago
@Aislinn-Mollisong aha, I see. 😛 *belatedly revives you*
So, was there anything that confused you about the story? How well were you able to connect to the characters and their motivations? Was it difficult to piece together the backstory?
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Alia replied to the topic Names…again…I think I have a problem in the forum Characters 8 years, 10 months ago
@inkling-for-christ, thanks for the links, I gone to the fantasy one, but not the other one.
@princessfoo, flower names, yes. I’ll have to look into that.
@emily-d, ooh, cultures, I like that idea.
@seekjustice, I really like those.
@ingridrd, the idea of them starting with the same letter is honestly amazing because the names could have…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Of Fairytales and Beta-readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 10 months ago
Thanks @Dekreel!
@Daughteroftheking not a problem. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers 🙂 in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
@Introvert_Girl heyyyyy! Another INFP! Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet, fellow INFP! 😀 😀 I’m type 4 as well with wings 5 and 9. *grins* So pleased to have you here. What genre do you primarily write in? Do you like poetry?
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Kina Lamb and
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
@inkling-for-christ Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!
I have an inkling you’ll like it here. 😉
Having writing friends has proven a big help to me in keeping on.
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Daeus replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@dekreel Sounds good.
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Joy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper I am SO late, but this is awesome!! Ooh, can I be in the possible next story too? *Bambi eyes*
HAHAHA all those cliche jokes! I’m in stitches!
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Joy replied to the topic Favorite Book? in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@inkling-for-christ *sighs* Wingfeather Saga! I know, I already commented about that in the START HERE forum but… well, ack the Wingfeather Saga is sooo good! lol
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Joy replied to the topic Of Fairytales and Beta-readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 10 months ago
@kate-flournoy Ooh, awesome! I’ll read it this weekend at the very least. Thank you! 😉
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus, Want to cameo as the icecream-loving king again? 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@lady-iliara I have noticed that you don’t seem to be the only Keeper here who is from… what was that place called…? Aethasia! @aislinn-mollisong is from there, too, correct? Tell me about Aethasia. Who else lives there?
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@epicaddie2 Question: Where do you Rangers live?
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@catwing Yeah you’re probably smaller than that. Size proportions isn’t my strong point when it comes to drawing. 😛
Catwing, @daughteroftheking, @emily, @sam-kowal, @lady-iliara, @others-who-have-submitted-characters  Thank you! Putting all of your characters on my list!
Anybody else?? *whistles a hint-hint tone*
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Joy replied to the topic Jewelry Business Name in the forum Art 8 years, 10 months ago
@shannon I like it!
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