Emma Flournoy

@aislinn-mollisong  Hooray! I have colors, but they’re a bit faded. I have no plot in the KPA whatsoever yet 😛 But it’s moving forward……..

@aislinn-mollisong  KAPEEFER! Are you still here? I’m writing  🙂

@aislinn-mollisong 😀 Okay. I’m working on it.

@ethryndal I love that Knights of Ren idea. I honestly haven’t had much of a clue as to what’s going to happen in episode 9 — which is awesome — but I think that would work really well if it turned out to be so.

Yeah. I love it. @ethryndal

What was your favorite part of the movie? Also, how many times have you seen it?

@That_writer_girl_99 I do hope he comes back, just not if it means we’ll have a ten year time gap or something to accommodate him, like some people are speculating. ‘Cause that would be weeeeeird… I thought it was cool though, because those three kids were a girl and two boys, kinda like Luke, Han, and Leia. It’s like the cycle is starting…[Read more]

@ethryndal I’ve missed you.

I agree on the Knights of Ren thing. That’s a very cool aspect of the story that I think deserves more depth.

About the boy at the end…do you think maybe he serves a dual purpose? Perhaps he will be in the next movie, as a little apprentice? Or maybe he’s just symbolizing the rebirth of the Jedi Order? I dunno, but…[Read more]

AGH I’ve been looking for this thread. Thanks, @dragon-Snapper .

@supermonkey42 The Jedi that fell with Kylo became the Knights of Ren, mentioned briefly in Force Awakens when Snoke called Kylo “Master of the Knights of Ren.” Honestly, I’m slightly fascinated by them. They’re not Sith, because Sith only go in pairs, so Kylo basically started the…[Read more]

I’m with @kate-flournoy here. Definitely recommend the course. It’s awesome. @daeus did a great job!

@Winter-Rose Well, the Emotions Thesaurus is my favorite, but you already have it so kudos to you. Positive Traits one is pretty awesome as well, particularly for developing the nitty-gritty details of a character.

@Mariposa This is just as great the second time as it was when I first saw it. I love how loyal we Keepers are. It’s like this downward spiral of corruption; once you become a Kapeefer, it will affect your life forevermore, and your family will be officially convinced that you’re crazy. It’s beautiful.

@Winter-Rose Well I basically agree with everything they’ve already said, so… yeah. *thumbs up* In all honesty, I seriously want to read this story. It sounds hilarious.

Only complaint is this:

But when the prodigy is anonymously–and specifically–requested to protect Amy Slate, the only daughter of a wealthy family of Telir, he is forced to tak…

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I’m here! I don’t remember if I’ve responded in depth to this thread…

Kylo Ren. and. Rey. Oh my word! Their whole arc throughout the movie was so cool. It was the reason I went back and saw the movie a second time.

@dekreel It’s pretty cool, though I haven’t done anything with group boards yet. #plansforthisweek 🙂

@daeus  Congrats! That’s some great advice 🙂  How are you liking Pinterest so far?

Okay, I actually did this thing. 😀 I’m now on Pinterest posting writing tips.

https://www.pinterest.com/excelsiorwritingschool/pins/

Hmm. I don’t know who would be interested in this. Here are some random tags. 🙂

@anne-of-lothlorien @seekjustice @graciegirl @mariposa @winter-rose @jenwriter17 @inkling-for-christ @christi-eaton @epicaddie2

@emily-d I really, really liked A Wrinkle In Time

It was  thoughtful, meaningful, almost spiritual, and it had a lot of intriguing symbolism and thing s like that. Open respect for Christianity, too, although it did mention there being good qualities in other religions.

Plus, Meg and Calvin are really great characters. Meg’s internal conflicts…[Read more]

@emily-d  *pursues* *growls ferociously*  …Just kidding ;P  I see what you’re saying about the weirdness and stuff. Personally, I like it because of the action, and because it was interesting seeing what Meg was learning.

I hear there’s a new movie coming out, so maybe that one will be better. Although, it’s a Disney movie, so… I don’t kn…[Read more]

@inkling-for-christ Yes, that’s exactly it. SHOW the environment, don’t have the narrator TELL the reader what it looks like. Have it be more like you’re looking directly through the narrator into the story, rather than that they’re trying to summarize what they saw for you and tell it back to you

@emily-d I really, really liked A Wrinkle In Time

It was  thoughtful, meaningful, almost spiritual, and it had a lot of intriguing symbolism and thing s like that. Open respect for Christianity, too, although it did mention the good qualities of other religions.

Plus, Meg and Calvin are really great characters. Meg’s internal conflicts are easy…[Read more]