EmilySF

@emilysf

By the way, I just realized what your profile picture says. XD

That could make sense. I would have this as hammered down as possible before the death scene of course. 😉

If you do ever read the Wingfeather Saga, some of this may clear up. But if you do, enjoy the series, don’t just read it for writing purposes. =) (I will especially…[Read more]

@emilysf IDEA Maybe Zoe should meet Corvina….

No matter what, Corvina’s not like Malcolm (she’s actually probably been kinda where Zoe’s been and while she won’t admit it will probably feel sorry for her.)

@emilysf

Oh, those are some interesting characters! I think I’ll like Sofia. 😉

@emilysf aww, she sounds like a great Charrie but poor thing!! Sounds like she needs to meet Jocelyn or Ara and November eventually!

if she meets Lyn, Lyn will definitely pull her out 🤣 (literally…like literally pull her.)

@emilysf POOR ZOE!!! Yikes!! Sounds like she’s had it rough!! Tho some of my charries have too soooooo lol

@emilysf

Hmmm, if you could write this well it could be powerful, but…hmm. My brain may have exploded over this one. Here are a few questions:

Is your MC dying just because he won’t defend himself/kill someone, or because he sees that Anti isn’t ready to die/has something he needs to do. Obviously someone willing to murder isn’t ready to die,…[Read more]

@koshka Imma go with it…that’s the only girl here other then @emilysf sooo XD

Arabella

“November!” Ara called softly, but it still echoed through the large corridors. She grasped her skirt tightly as the sound of her footsteps clonked against the stone. It was darker here, in this corridor. She’d left the one with windows long ago, and now…[Read more]

ALSO YALL….Other then @emilysf character who hasn’t had a scene….Ara is the only girl in the castle and it kinda cracks me up XD

@devastate-lasting

I. Have. No. Words. FOR HOW RELATABLE THAT IS

@emilysf YOU HEAR THAT??? JUST THROW SOMETHING WACKO OUT THERE!!!! *whispers* or give me story scraps… XD

@emilysf (Do you want me to stop tagging? LOL)

No, please don’t stop tagging me, as I know you’ve posted something because KP emails me when you tag me!

Lol yes, I suppose it could be lots of fun!

Ohhhh sounds like another great plot idea!

@emilysf, WOW!! The idea of the world Bust is just so ridiculously fun!! It sounds like an absolute delight to write! You have some amazing ideas!

Also, my brother got me the Evenstar necklace one year for my birthday… (Random fact that literally no one needed to know) LOL

@emilysf

I’m not good at anything besides English and Latin, and the language I’m trying to make up but is unfortunately for a different world and I don’t want traveling worlds, lolll

I WANNA LEARN ELVISH!!!

THAT IS A MOOD I decided that it would be a smart idea to create like 5 different languages for one world.

Trust me.

It was not a good id…[Read more]

@emilysf

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!! That is actually pretty amazing. (I WISH I HAD THE SKILL TO MATCH MY LANGUAGE OBSESSION, but I’m the sort of person who’d love to learn all the languages in the world, but can’t because I just can’t learn any languages. 😭 I have learned Latin, and I know English, but besides that what I know is just words o…

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@emilysf

HOW DO I COME UP WITH NAMES FOR MY WORLD THAT AREN’T TOALLY WACKO??? (And fit the tone I want them to set…)

YES YES YES YOU’VE COME TO THE RIGHT PLACE LITERALLY NAMING THINGS IS MY FAVORITE THING IN THE WHOLE WORLDBUILDING PROCESS BESIDES LITERALLY EVERYTHING ELSE CUZ HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO PICK A FAVORITE?????? XD

Okay.

So.

First rul…[Read more]

@emilysf

(Is this like a line by line role play, or a scene by scene role play sort of thing?)

It’s definitely more like paragraph by paragraph. Since this is not on a crazy active forum (as in everyone spends every minute of every day writing posts) please don’t wait for someone else’s character to act. 🙂 That’s how we spend an enormous amount…[Read more]

@emilysf

YESSSS!!!!!!!!!! I made a topic for The Silm in the book discussions section so I WILL LOOK FOR YOU THERE!!!!! XD GAH that’s AWFUL I hate reading ruts soooo much and one that lasts a WHOLE YEAR???? UGHHHHHHH I’m sooo sorry. 🙁 TELL ME WHEN YOU GET THERE AND I WILL THROW CONFETTI WITH YOUUUU!!!!!!! And rant. Lots and lots of…[Read more]

@emilysf

I saw the word TOLKIEN and knew we had to be friends. WELCOME TO THE FORUM!!!!!

I’d say I go 95% into being totally engrossed and learned and addicted. It is very very close to obsession, heh. I probably am not an all out Tolkien fan, like buying Tolkien stuff all the time, but I do love love love to read the books, and even dare to r…

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@emilysf Ahhh gotcha. Ok so not sure I can help much but I do think the Wingfeather sag might help. So what happens in it isn’t like your story but it might help anyway I hope.

As for ur motive I mean I think it’ll be fine so long as u can write it well, that’s usually what it comes down to 😊

@emilysf Wow! This was absolutely riveting! And the plot you’ve crafted and woven sounds phenomenal. It’s a little funny too, because in the book I’m writing currently, My MC dies as well!

And as far as your questionings go, I would say that what you were thinking by the end of writing all that out (the idea of having the only way out as killing…[Read more]

@emilysf so I’ve actually started a page for character death discussions because I’m struggling with a character death myself.

I’m not entirely sure I can give much advice because….well just being honest I myself am a bit….confused if that makes sense. But some of that might be it is a LOT harder to explain your ideas on here then what they are…[Read more]