EmilySF

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @koshka

Viktor

They gained the out leading corridor, passing side halls with rapid succession. Soon there would be a narrow window and they’d have some light.

How he hungered for that light!

Their pursuer was still there, but much less frightening. He nearly scolded himself for bolting in the first place. Nearly.

As…[Read more]

@emilysf Really cool! Yeah, Feather’s story is a little like that. I created her and her sisters without knowing what to do with them, then realized they fit perfectly into the Star Wars universe right about the time of The Bad Batch (if you’ve seen that show). She’s the main antagonist’s sorta girlfriend (at least before he turned evil anyway).…[Read more]

@emilysf Yours is from a fanfic too? Awesome! Maybe she can meet my charries later…..

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @koshka

Okay, so it deleted my response, I don’t know if the original will pop up later as well, but I’m going ahead and posting this, since I thankfully have the story part saved.

I also don’t know how well this one worked out, but here goes!

By the way, Milla sounds nice! Unfortunately, she has a talent for spooking…[Read more]

@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @koshka

So, I’m not sure how well this one worked out, but here goes!

Milla sounds nice! Unfortunately, she seems to have a talent for spooking my charries. XD It’s not her fault though.

Viktor

They were close, so close. He could feel the draft from the approaching door.

Thankfully Alya hadn’t been injured in her…[Read more]

@emilysf

Hm… it’s hard to get anything specific in my head! It hink I’d like to know just some things that you think are cool and why, and also if there are common misconceptions about Catholicism that most people believe that aren’t true.

Wow! So many siblings! I love it tho! I love giant families XD And that’s exciting about the oldest! One…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting @emilysf @augustinaii @elishavet-pidyon @koshka

Thanks for the inputs! 😀

@emilysf

Awesome!

Well, yeah, I tend to be around quite a few people with opposing worldviews. Though it usually ends up with far more conflict and split paths than heroic character arcs that inspire the people around them, haha.

@emilysf

I think it’s great that you have a character that displays what the end of the MC’s character arc will be, so maybe for your students it could be the opposite of that. They could be the resistance to the MC’s character arc.

They would demonstrate different world views on the theme of “changing the world for the better”, Which would…[Read more]

@emilysf

Wow! That’s such a cool idea!

I wish I could help more but I just don’t know how! I feel like I would need to know more about the twins and how the actual magic system works with the whole “opposites and double gifted” thing.

I’m still trying to figure out how to display the themes in my book, but one of the best pieces of advice I’ve…[Read more]

@emilysf

Well, I guess I shouldn’t say all the secrets, but hopefully more! There is supposed to be a tenth book that I think will be the last one…

Sophie isn’t my favorite either, but I definitely admire that she isn’t perfect. I think that makes her realistic. My favorite character is Keefe! 🙂

Yes! I’m finding out the more I build up a…[Read more]

@koshka @emilysf @elishavet-pidyon

This is going to be interesting…

Viktor

They would not get his sister. He would not let them. They would suppose she was a truant slave. They would punish her for assisting intruders. They…

They would look past her Yartassite upbringing and see her Eirtanian blood.

But no, Alyona wouldn’t be the one to…[Read more]

@koshka @emilysf @elishavet-pidyon HERE I AM! WOO LOL

November

“Run.” Zlatan’s voice was sharp and strong. Commanding. November’s eyes widened as the footsteps outside the door grew and a pounding thud sounded, like a knock.

He gripped Ara’s hand, squeezing it tighter then he probably should have, and rushed down the hall Viktor and Alyona had…[Read more]

@emilysf

Hmmmm…. I like this topic, first off, because I also have some underdeveloped side characters, so I can relate.

Because of that, however, I may not be the most helpful, but I will try to offer some advice. I also think I remember you referring to this story about the mentor. But I don’t know much more that that so just keep that in…[Read more]

@emilysf

Yes!!!!!!! I love that series so much! The characters are great and that’s probably the main thing I look for in good stories! And the world is really cool too! I’m so excited/nervous for the next book because all the secrets are going to be revealed and we’ve been waiting for them for a while! Um… I think I’ve been into it since…[Read more]

@denali-christianson @godly-fantasy12 @koshka @emilysf @elishavet-pidyon

Wow, I’m late to this! XD

But I was just wondering, from the rules stated at the beginning of the forum, if there are already ten characters in the castle and if there is not, could I add one??

I totally understand if not! Just curious! 🙂

@emilysf

First off! Cool pen name!

Second of all! DID I HEAR YOU ARE A KOTLC FAN????

(pls say so. It would be a tad embarrassing if I was just hallucinating…)

Anyways, hello! My names Hallie! How do you do?? I have been absent from the forum for quite a while but am excited to be back!!!

You’ve probably already answered this, but what genre…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @emilysf I’ll try to RP replies tomorrow! I’m on vacay but I’ll be sitting in the car for a while some tomorrow so 😊

@emilysf

I’m subscribed to this topic, so I did get your post. I’ve copy and pasted it here. @godlyfantasy12 may have it too, since she was tagged.

@godlyfantasy12

Zoe/Snow

I’m sorry. Sorry. Sorry.

Her thoughts ran on repeat with the memory. The memories. She wanted to slip back to the innocence of Snow, the purity and simplicity of that…[Read more]