Elly

She can be a stereotype on the outside without being one on the inside. If she isn’t a POV character, maybe she could have someone she can confide in.

@bethanysinkyroses I’d agree with what Mark and Kate said. You’ve got a setting, but you don’t have any sort of plot. Predicaments alone are very boring. The predicaments need to build on each other. The outcome of one should lead to another, gradually making things worse and worse.

I also agree that clashing fantasy and slice of life isn’t a…[Read more]

@radically-surrendered WOOT YES, I’m Aussie. *waves enthusiastically*

@Dragon-snapper Farewell! Thanks for writing! 😀

@Dragon-Snapper I most certainly do! *hands you some*
(and sorry, I got called away to help my dad with something and didn’t have time to mention that I temporarily disappeared. >.<)

@Dragon-Snapper @salome01w4g Welcome, welcome, and hello. *waves*

@SeekJustice I’m here to join you!! I have two chapters to critique/edit.

I’ll be worldbuilding for awhile if anyone wants to join me. @shannon @dragon-snapper @xonos-darkgrate

Ah, but see, therein lies the wittiness of my comment…for in telling you I wasn’t going to make a comment, I also reflected my disdain, no? @xonos-darkgrate

@princessfoo I’m going to refrain from making a comment about Rogue One.

Welcome to the site @radically-surrendered! Glad you were able to pull yourself enough away from social media to join us. 😉 Have you written any longer works in the past, or will this pirate story be your first?

@Catwing yay good job! See you around. 🙂

@salome01w4g alrighty! Sleep well, girl. *waves*

@Catwing sounds like fun!! I’m halfway through chapter 37 (of Hope Ann’s novel Fidelyon) and it’s pretty good. *nodnod*

@Catwing @Salome01w4g I am here to join you! I’ll be critiquing/editing.

I…yeah, I’d appreciate Hannah. Just for my schoolwork in general. @salome01w4g

Erm, let’s not talk about my test.

@dragon-snapper It’s actually a relatively…doable class, all things considered.

Ethics is…studying different lines of philosophical thought and applying them to real-world scenarios, while at the same time trying to find the decision that benefits everyone. @dragon-snapper

*sighs* Ethics… @dragon-snapper

Yeah, I’m here. @dragon-snapper still studying, though…