Elly

Hm. Yes. Okay. *writes this down*

I’m concerned about my theme. When I started the story, Intelligence vs. Ignorance sounded like a good idea, but now that I’ve planned out the characters a bit more, and now that I know them better… I’m not sure the theme would work. These characters–especially Matthias and Kara–are going to struggle with a…[Read more]

@Cloudy Here’s a few edits.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tyeRhcHZhx1ekZca42KKZz1ZMZw01Mm46ITKkUS2c_c/edit?usp=sharing

@Ethryndal Why thank you. I try my best to be thorough. 😛

@delightinlife Now I have the unpleasant task of trying to beta read after @jane-maree‘s wretched thoroughness. *groans* Jane, remind me to have you beta read my novel when it’s done. 😉 Bella, I’m going to do a little tonight, but I’ll probably finish tomorrow.

PS. I’m the Sarah Baran in the comments. Just so you don’t get freaked out by the…[Read more]

@Daeus cool! Great job. *offers pizza*

@jane-maree @graciegirl Just finished up. I edited a chapter and did some extra grammar checks.

@DelightInLife okay I’ve gone over it. 😀

@graciegirl *charges you rent*

@GracieGirl cool! Good luck with that. 😛

@jane-maree *bows* Great. 🙂

@Daeus I’m editing and critiquing.

@DelightInLife @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @graciegirl @winter-rose @jane-maree @that_writer_girl_99 I’m writing now.

@DelightInLife Onto it! *hops over to check it out*

@DelightInLife hopefully it’ll be fine. Should be. (I can always stay up late tonight to do it, so yep.)

Aw no. *gives you more pizza*

@DelightInLife Today works for me. *nods* I’ll hopefully be able to grab some time (between packing :P) to give it a once over for you! 😀
*accepts cookies and passes you pizza*

@DelightInLife So cool that you’re almost done your short story *applauds* I just realised that I’m not sure how soon I’ll be able to get to it because I’m actually away over the weekend and won’t have any computer time. Do you have a deadline?

@DelightInLife So cool that you’re almost done *applauds* I just realised that I’m not sure how soon I’ll be able to get to it because I’m actually away over the weekend and won’t have any computer time. Do you have a deadline?

@Alia I’ll be praying! Graduations are certainly important. 🙂

Thanks! Midpoint. Yeah, that’s the word I was looking for.

Ugh…I still don’t know what to do with Blake. At this point, I’m envisioning him outside the prison, which actually isn’t where I had him at the beginning of my planning, but you know how that goes. The characters do what they want, sometimes.

Also, it makes sense when you consider…[Read more]

Me too! Any place with fantastical creatures would be a cool place to me. @princessfoo