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@jess-penrose This outline works a lot better! Two comments! First, it’s unclear–at least in outline form–how he better brings about justice by staying in London. Is there a bad situation there that he needs to try and rectify? Second, he seems to too easily switch from the second EiL to the third. your “beginning of venn diagram 2” moment seems…[Read more]

@northerner Okay, I got a chapter edited. *nods* Thanks for writing with me.

@perfectfifths If you’re doing a theme of trust as well, I would begin by creating a focusing question and five different answers for that FQ with regards to your theme of trust. I think that structure works well as a general arc for this kind of theme, though. How do you plan on splitting it up between books? Or, to put it another way, what will…[Read more]

@northerner Okay. Great.

@that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @jess @audrey-caylin @northerner @graciegirl @winter-rose

Looks like I just missed a session, but I’m here now for about a half an hour.

@that_writer_girl @ethryndal @jess @audry-caylin @northerner @graciegirl @winter-rose

Looks like I just missed a session, but I’m here now for about a half an hour.

@delightinlife Prose is writing on the sentence level. It’s how you phrase things. It’s things like showing instead of telling, how you write dialogue, whether you write flowery sentences or short punch sentences. This is opposed to things like story structure character back story which are broad picture writing principles.

Haha! No way! Gotta love summer.

I’m a little worried. There are some intense emotions revealing themselves in this chapter, and I’m not sure how they’ll turn out. Writing characters realistically is always a challenge for me… @winter-rose

I’m still so in love with this. The part with the raspberries and the ice cream… *cackles*

@winter-rose I’m at the beach currently, so I don’t even have Prison in front of me, but I’m outlining for Chapter Six.

@anne-of-lothlorien I think it would be a comfort. Until I got bored. Then I would want something to read.

@anne-of-lothlorien No, I don’t know Spanish.

@anne-of-loghlorien No, I don’t know Spanish.

@GracieGirl Welcome! 😀

@That_Writer_Girl_99 hehe yes. xD It’s 12:12 for me. 😛

Lunch, huh? Goodness. It’s past 10pm where I live. @jane-maree

@That_Writer_Girl_99 I might duck out to grab some lunch soon, but I’m still here currently.

@kate-flournoy Are you on?

@Daeus @Winter-Rose okay! Good job to you both. 😀

Signing off, @winter-rose and @jane-maree. I edited 950.