Ellie Wingfeather

@acancello

Marcurious

He tensed as the clamor of battle roared in his ears.

“Climb on!” he shouted, and shapeshifted into a horse. Hugo and Ottoline scrambled on, and Marcurious took off at full gallop. He had to find somewhere safe…

There! He spotted a small cave into the side of a hill. Ottoline and Hugo slid off and Marcurious changed…[Read more]

@rae

Sef

She took a deep breath.

“I can’t believe I just met you,” she laughed a little, “I feel like I’ve known you my whole life.”

@trailblazer

Of course XD

@rae

I have to get off now…I’ll continue this later!

@rae

Oh my gosh I’m gonna cry….this is so sweet and sad!!

Sef 

Before she could think twice she wrapped her arms around Chase.

He understood.

@trailblazer

Look at my signature…hehe

@rae

OH MY GOSH YOUR SIGNATURE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

excuse me while I go change mine…

@rae

Sef

She stiffened.

Tears pricked her eyes.

“A man abused me…for two years…after they took my mother…” a tear slipped down her face, but she didn’t care anymore. Someone understood her.

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Sef

“I-I think so?” Sef breathed, relieved that Chase didn’t ridicule her for being so ignorant of how to dance.

Finally the two found a pattern and Chase helped Sef when she messed up, which Sef was grateful for. Dancing wasn’t as bad as she thought it would be, and she felt herself beginning to relax.

Suddenly she felt his eyes on her…[Read more]

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Sef

She flinched as he touched her. She didn’t like to be touched. But his touch was gentle, soft, comforting, almost. She caught sight of his scarred hands and felt a pang of…what was it? Sympathy? She knew what it felt like to have maps of pain carved into your skin to be remembered for eternity.

“I-I’m not sure h-how t-to dance,” she…[Read more]

Heyyy we broke the record!!

Well, we broke the record for the first time in 6 years.

When you put it that way…that makes it sound so much cooler XD

@esther-c

Aww…Lukas has a crush! <333 (so does Liv…lol)

Livia 

“Are you sure? You can tell me anything,” Liv smiled back.

(Sorry I didn’t know what else to have her say, lol)

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Sef

She didn’t know where she was. All she knew was that she wanted to leave.

All around her people were dancing in pairs.

“Excuse me, miss,” a woman…[Read more]

I’m here….I’ve been excited all day XD

@rae

Ummm…OF COURSE!!! I THOUGHT YOU’D NEVER ASK!!! lol

Should I have her randomly appear in the dance class and be paired with Chase since he’s not dancing with anyone?

@esther-c

I know Abbie Emmons on YouTube loves the three act story structure, so if you want to explore that a little more, I suggest checking out her videos. Especially the one just about the inciting incident. I think she does a pretty good job of explaining it. 😉

I will check it out!! I need all the help I can get…. XD

@freedomwriter76

Girlllll I love your writing so much!! (it almost always makes me tear up but I love it!!!!!)

Does it seem boring?

NOOOO! Definitely not! I was so into it, and I could see everything in my mind!How is the pace?

Can you already begin to see the MC’s struggles/arcs?

A little, I can tell that Riker struggles with guilt and L…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Tysm for your help and encouragement!! Every single time someone tells me something they loved about my story it makes me smile 🙂

At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make somebody have that many issues unless she was also sick, and the buildup made me think her sickness was going to tie into the greater story i…

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@trailblazer

I love it sooooooo much!!! LIBBIE HURRY UP AND SAY YOU’LL MARRY HIM!!!! AHHHH!! lol!

#LALBERT

@trailblazer

Aw me too! That was so funny XD

@acancello

Oh my goodness, congratulations!! That’s so exciting!!