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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 3 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeeemed @esther-c @grcr
First chapter of my new version!!!!! WITH the twist!!!
And yes, Jraldath and Selena used to be Paynes….hehehe
It was a dark night-clouds moving from the west blotted out any light from the twin moons, and tendrils of fog curled around the two lone figures drifting through the streets of Lir.
Selena held…
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 3 weeks ago
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 3 weeks ago
Well that’s good I guess lol
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 3 weeks ago
YEAH BUT IT MAKES IT MORE DEPRESSING…..
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 4 weeks ago
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 4 weeks ago
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 4 weeks ago
Heyyyy….so I remember that you were helping me with writing at one point (and I’ll admit I wasn’t the most open to criticism, so I apologize…I was going through a hard time of doubting myself, and getting frustrated that it wasn’t good enough)
I was wondering if you’d like to take a look at it again, since I’m kind of…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 4 weeks ago
@acancello (GURL U ALIVE?!?!?!) @esther-c @freed_and_redeemed @grcr @anyone-else
I may or may not have done something unexpected.
So you guys remember Jraldath????
Turns out….Lilitu’s dad is Jraldath.
And Jraldath is also Hanna’s father.
So Lilitu and Hanna are half siblings.
And Lilitu is kinda sorta, part Pythonos.
(please don’t hate me…..)
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Sara replied to the topic Guardian Angels, a space story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 months, 4 weeks ago
Hey girl!!!!! How are you doing?
I really want to read all your writing! I started reading the Google Doc you posted, but I can’t read it all tonight, haha!
Honestly, whenever you talk about your charries and worlds and planets I just get so lost…because there are SO MANY OF THEM! So I really want to read the actual writing so I won’t be…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 4 weeks ago
Okay haha! I should try to write contemporary fiction sometime, it sounds super fun!
@smiley @esther
I never write scenes in my head….but I always replay conversations in my head….or think about all the embarassing things I have ever done in my life XD
I also think about a bunch of comebacks I could have said to people who were b…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 4 weeks ago
I LOVE IT
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Sara replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 4 weeks ago
*GASP* you should have a bunch of drama with Tyler and Hallie….like Hallie could like Tyler (and that’s why when he passes away it affects her so much) and it could distract her from God too, because she’s trying to impress him!
Or she might not actually like him, but she tells herself she does because everyone else likes someone and…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 4 weeks ago
ohhh haha after all this time I am still tagging you by your old tag…oops
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 4 weeks ago
@freedomwriter76
Aww thanks!!!!! That means a lot <3
Are the rubber bands the things that connect to your top bracket and your bottom band? because that’s what I have (though i can take mine out for eating and stuff). They hurt so bad and I hate them!
Braces just suck :/
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 4 weeks ago
YOUR KITTENS ARE ADORABLE
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 4 weeks ago
I LOVE RIKER SO MUCH <333333
I had one of these moments a few weeks ago…I’ve been having a hard time with feeling not good enough, like a mistake, and like God’s grace was for everybody else….and then I started asking the same questions as Riker, and then I felt God speaking to me! Those bad thoughts don’t really bother…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 4 weeks ago
I love that!
Felicity’s snort came out louder than expected. “Lois? Isn’t that a girl’s name?”
“No, it’s not. It’s mine.”
I love that sooo much!
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Sara replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 months, 4 weeks ago
I love that sooo much! How are you so good at character dialogue? Like, you’re amazing at having your characters tease each other and make funny situations! I wish I could do that, lol
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hybridlore posted an update 6 months ago
@esther-c @acancello Hey, how are y’all doing? It feels like it’s been a while since we talked!
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Hey!! It has been a while!
I’m good! Busy, but good. 😉 The volleyball season is about to start with tryouts at the end of June. Right now it’s just open gyms and fitness training instead of actual practices. I’m really excited for the season though!
Writing’s been pretty good. I’m working on a new WIP over the summer which I’m really excited abo…[Read more]
That’s exciting! Yeah, I saw you posted on the Chat Chat about it and it sounded really interesting! I love sibling relationships in books so much haha. What’s the plot like?
I’m doing pretty good too! In real life, I haven’t been too busy now that school’s out. My grandparents have been coming over a lot and hanging out, so that’s been fun. I’ve…[Read more]
Thanks! Yeah, it’s gonna be so much fun. 😁 So there’s not a ton of action and it revolves around the theme of finding out what’s worth the world. So in Easton’s case, he learns that being there for someone and investing in their life can make more of a difference than trying to change the whole world, because to that one person, it means the wor…[Read more]
I get that! Sort of slower-paced, but more focused on the characters and their relationships. Cool!
Yeah, I really like it! I usually just do it while watching shows or movies with my family in the evening–once you know how to do it, it doesn’t require full concentration 😉. Oh boy . . . a lot of stuff. Two blankets, gloves, a couple bags, a…[Read more]
Yep!
Ooh fun! I’ve been into making friendship bracelets lately, so I kinda do the same thing.
Yeah, I totally get that. (: