Ellie Wingfeather

@esther-c

Ugh, sorry you’re going through that! That’s hard!

Could you maybe post some segments of it so I can see more of what you mean?

All I can say is that maybe you’re focusing a little too much on all the potential problems. (I’m speaking from experience) Sometimes you need a little break, or maybe you’re overthinking it. If its boring to…[Read more]

I’m gonna do a sprint, i’ll probably start at :50 and end at :20 or something like that, if anyone wants to join.

@jonas

Yeah, I think just adding villains to this one will work.

@esther-c

Oof, those are hard questions. For the first one, I get what you mean. I think for the first chapter, an introduction is fine. Personally, I would try to focus on the relationship between Ami and Ev, and his family conflict, because I think that will hook the reader.
And then, themes are also really hard. Could you describe yours a…[Read more]

@jonas

Yeah, I’m good with whatever XD

It might make more sense to keep them seperate…it was just an idea…the Dark Castle RP does seem kind of slow right now and i thought it might help speed things up XD as well as solve the question of what the king wants and why they’re there.

@jonas

Well, we could combine them while keeping them separate at the same time. What I mean is…they’ll have the same story as the Character Party, but we’ll just RP the villains in the Dark Castle RP and RP the “heroes” here. The two role plays would intersect, or so to speak, when the villains cross paths with the “heroes”, but we’d role play…[Read more]

And since everyone in the Dark Castle RP is already in this one as well, it would be easier to connect the RP’s.

@jonas

I have an idea for the group of villains…what if we just put any new villains into the dark castle RP? The king that pulled them there is an enemy of the Queen and of Lillen, and he needs people to help him fight and stuff. Then it might not be so confusing like it would if we just dumped more characters into this one.

But that’s just an idea.

Hey guys…I’m back!

@esther-c

Awwww thanks! <3

@jonas

goodnight! I have to go too.

@jonas

lol

@rae

Nope.

@jonas

Here’s my failing attempt at one of Marcurious:

@jonas

yours are actually funny though!!!

@rae

I’ll be back in like two mins, having lag and think I can fix it. See ya soon!

Okay!

@jonas

why are you so good at memes?????

Despicable Fennin!

Exactly. Just add a russian accent, a big nose, and it’s perfect!