@ellette-giselle
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The slavery bit seems to be everyone’s fav. 😂
No…. I’m not gonna explain the painting scene. You and everyone else are in the dark and will just have to do your best to figure it out.🙃
Thanks for answering these!!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
This guy is insane.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
GIRL! Your pfp!!!
So good!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
I learned to draw people by tracing black and white photographs for an entire year. I really learned the way people work. That was just me though. idk if that would help everyone.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
Thank you so much!!!!
KP isn’t hitting a lot of people with tags lately.
If you think of anyone to tag for this it would really help. Everyone who decides to click on the website helps others be able to find it because it gets more hits so it comes to the top of the search easier….. and all that fun stuff. 🙄
Anyways, Thanks again!!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
Lololol.
We have two.
Below freezing
Burning hot.
Five days ago we had a blizzard. (I went and walked in it so that I could write it accurately in a book I was working on)
The next day it was in the 80s F.
Today it’s in the 90s. F.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
THANK YOU!!!!!!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
Oooo! Fun!!! I love that story so much!
Knew what?!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
@linus-smallprint   @hybridlore
Oh my word! I just saw that tiny bit of the test you created, Linus. I actually stared at it for a full minute because I was too scared to mess with it. That book is 100% way too real for me. 😂 And then I did a Cole move, threw caution to the wind, and have spent the last five minutes trying to hack it.
That thing is insanely scary cool.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
WOW!!!!
That is insanely good! You gotta tag me every time you post. I LOVE your art!!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
Okay that makes sense.
That is totally how I plan to have this structured, but at that time, many of the men were hearing about God for the first time, and the Bible talks about leaders and teachers being strong in their faith and well rooted in belief before they teach.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
Thank you for the feedback!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
Sorry!!!
You should have chosen an MC as your favorite. They actually all survived this time. 😂
I was like, oh no, she’s gonna love him and he’s gonna die. (he’s my favorite too, so we can cry together)
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
I hope so too! It’s up to the others if they’re read for the next one.
Although, one question. Was the Christian prince the only one? Who’s gonna inherit the throne when the Emperor dies now? (Don’t tell me the priests have tried to make it so one of them will get it.)
Dietrich was sole heir. His brother died as a baby.
That is a question to be answered……….
I’m so glad you like the ending!!
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.
@hybridlore   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @liberty @linus-smallprint
QUESTIONS!
Characters:
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?
~Where the characters believable?
~Did they have good, individual personalities, or were they clones?
~ Were the relationships between characters well-developed and meaningful?
~ Were there any characters you wanted to see more of?
~ Did any characters feel unnecessary to the story?
~Did it work having two MCs
Note: Please keep in mind that I can’t full develop every character within the story, otherwise there wouldn’t be enough spotlight on my MC. Y’all know what I mean? My MCs are Julian and Leon, and close to them would be Aelic, Rolf, and Roland, the others are side characters.
Storyline:
~ Was the plot solid and engaging?
~ Did the pacing feel consistent throughout the book? If not, where did it lag or feel dull?
~Was there anything that seemed unbelievable or forced?
~ Were there any plot twists or surprises that stood out to you?
~ Was the ending fitting and satisfying? (in the unsatisfying way that it was written 😄)
~ Were any parts of the story confusing or difficult to follow?
~ Were there any unresolved plot threads you wish had been dealt with in this book?
~~ Was the balance between action, dialogue and description smooth in the story?
Theology/Message:
~ Any theological concerns for the story?
~ What would you say my world view was?
~ What would you say was the message of the story?
~Were the characters’ struggles dealt with effectively?
Extra:
~ What was your favorite part of the book overall?
~What was your least favorite part?
~Who was your favorite character?
~Who was your least favorite? (if you have one)
~Is there anything that you would say needs to be changed?
~ Which scenes would you want to see illustrations for?
~ What would you say the target audience of this book would be?
~ Any predictions for the next book?
~ Any other thoughts
Thank y’all so much for everything!! I can’t wait for thoughts and feedback! It’s been so fun having y’all reading this and your encouragement along the way has been incredible!
Oh, also, when would be a good time for me to start the next book on here? Maybe end of April? Or sooner would be better, but I know Linus and maybe one or two of you others like a break.
No half-heartedness and no worldly fear must turn us aside from following the light unflinchingly.