@ellette-giselle
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Leo
Rory slammed into him. He gasped and stumbled backward, snagging a doorknob to keep from falling.
The door opened behind him and he went down, pulling Rory with him. An assortment of mops and and cleaning supplies caught his fall.
A janitor’s closet.
Quickly, Leo pushed the door shut with his boot. They sat in silence for…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
This’ll be fun.
I was thinking they’d get out, but not easily (so we can have more fun), but if you have another idea, please go ahead. Leo’s focus right now is getting Rory and himself out the mess they’re in. Where would they go? That depends on what you want to do. They could go to Leo’s apartment, or hanger, or somewhere…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Sorry it’s mostly Leo jabbering..
Leo
He stared at Rory for a moment, then slowly smiled. Didn’t Silvia always say God had a sense of humor?
“Yes Rory, you’ll be safe with me, Lord willing. I may need an assistant, who knows? However, our first priority is to get you out of this building undetected. We can figure out the…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Thank you ladies so much!!! This info is super helpful and I’m sure I would have had to dig through too many articles to get it otherwise. 😖😂 I appreciate your help!! 😊
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Keilah H. replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle IKR????
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 3 weeks ago
That last one, I don’t really like the way your name is done, but I think the layout of the title is nice! I like how it flows with the picture. Maybe if you put your name in the font it is on the 4th version of your cover?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Yes, I did know Ellette was joking.
(The problem with these forum chats is it can be hard to portray emotion. Prehapes I should use more emojis or something.)
You’re so mean.
I don’t draw dogs, or anything in the dog family if I can help it. It never looks right. – Ellette
Sorry, can’t help you there XD
I suck…
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Stephie replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Whoa. There is nothing else in my book that causes it to stand out?!?
There’s a lot that causes your book to stand out. All of the different species you’ve come up with, for example, and the complex characters. The plot is original, your narration is funny and fresh, and thus far it’s a unique story!
We all really just want a…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Of the covers you provided, I like version 4 the best. It feels the most balanced and official to me. I like the font and the chosen colour for your name. I’m not sold on the outline you have on the font on the bottom, but not entirly against it either. I understand why you are doing it: so that we can see the words,
Did you…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle yeah it’s a good one
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
I don’t know why, but this whole time I have really, really wanted one of the characters to give Stripe a hug. Like one of the little kids. It would be so cute, especially because he does not seem lie a hugs person, yet his protector side wouldn’t let him hurt a little kid. lol. – Ellette
Now that I’ve read ellett…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Please tell me you kept Stripe’s glasses (or at least have another bespectacled Kunulf in the story somewhere, if you didn’t) cause I love the look of it.
He was wearing these in Chapter the 18th. He only wears them for reading.
does that imply that a “vunny” exists? some animal, maybe?
Yes. This is a creature something like a rabbit.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
I’m glad you enjoy it! We are writing it as an exercise, but we’re posting it for y’all’s enjoyment and to give us accountability
so we actually finish it.Thanks! It’s been fun to play with.
Ah yes, I love that chapter mostly for it’s snark. XD
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle wowww awesome! I do agree they kinda look better than in the movies, if only cause there’s more contrast between his dark hair and her pale. In the movies their hair color was more similar and they look more like they could be related than a couple.
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Koshka replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Awww, they’re so sweet.
He’s pretty much perfect.
I suppose I always saw her with longer hair, but she’s adorable. XD
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Stephie replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Welp, here’s this week’s installment. Enjoy!
In Which Books Lie, and the Sun Sets
Chapter 3
My legs were killing me. We had been walking for hours with hardly any real breaks, and I’d quickly discovered that even dwarves move at an incredible pace. The books lied. Muscles don’t miraculously strengthen when you get c…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@elishavet-pidyon mmm sounds good. Haven’t had that brand specifically but I have had some good popsicles.
@ellette-giselle lol those quotes are too funny!! of course the last one is great in a serious kinda way but the rest are hilarious kind of great.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Leo
He’d been right.
“Rory, sit down please.” His voice was low, calm. “There are no cameras in this hall, or mics in this room. I’ve checked before for Quincy. So unless you’re bugged yourself, we’re still good. Which, if you are bugged, don’t worry. I’ve worked pest control before. There’s only One all-seeing, and He happens…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 3 weeks ago
instinct forcing him to brace for the moment this all shattered and Leo turned on him.
GAAAHHH…
Have you heard the song Soul worth Saving by Apollo LTD?
Leo
“No problem kid.” His voice was husky around the lump in his throat. He gave Rory’s shoulder a light squeeze. “Really, no problem.”
The boy tensed, then relaxed, t…[Read more]
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