Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

That works! Just swap wife and son for parents.

@stephie

The one thing I’m going to criticize is what Charles says when his son is saved: 

Okay, I will see what I can do about that. Though I may put this one off for a bit. Thank you for pointing this out. I’m not the most emotional person, so sometimes I struggle with writing em…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Lol, I was wondering when you would start wanting the backstory.

This is a good opportunity to see how someone who has not read Book I can understand this book. Like it or not, some people will start to read your series with Book II, III, or IV. Remember to provide the context for these readers so that they will be able to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Believe me, these stories are marketed for 8-year-olds:

• Wings of Fire (dragon series I read once with a good deal of violence. One character’s death is so graphic the writer didn’t even describe it, although that was in a side story that I didn’t read though cause it didn’t grab me.)
• Warrior cats series (LOTS of war and…

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@ellette-giselle

I’m fine with it, but Baron is gonna lose his mind if you do that. lol

Oh you have no idea. Not only is it storming which increases his power, he’s also gonna have to go into fight mode.

@jonas

I’m good with it

@whalekeeper @loopylin @hybridlore

Ellis —— Elderstrand (w/ Marcel, Felicity, and Sara)

“I don’t like this place,” Ellis muttered. “Where do we go now?”

Just then, there was a sound of shouting. Ellis turned and saw soldiers scurrying along the wall above. They were trapped.

There was the sound of a patrol coming down a street to the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @rae @raxforge @grcr

So, your characters are inside the city? Within the wall? Well, I’m thinking of having the city go on lockdown, which may provide some lovely drama. That would also be a good opportunity to send in the NPCs if you’re ready.

@ellette-giselle

Forgot to tag you in my RP above

Tsk, tsk, tsk. Terrible (joking)

@ellette-giselle @rae @grcr

Ben Gunn, Flare – Baron (Brutus), Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge

“How about, no.” Ben did not want to have to fight with more guards, “We should go out of the city, and stay out there for the night.”

Flare nodded with approval.

@ellette-giselle @grcr @rae

Leon and Julian—with Baron, Ben Gunn, Flare, and Marcellus, Everstrand edge

Leon stared at the scar, and he felt a tightness in his throat. He knew the kind of men responsible for something like this. In fact, that was why he was here. He glanced over at his friend. Julian’s face had paled, and he was clenching and u…[Read more]

@raxforge @ellette-giselle @grcr

I’m gonna write a really short rp this time.

Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge

Baron gently replaced his scarf, careful to make sure it covered the scar, before turning away so that his face was cast in shadow.

@rae @ellette-giselle @grcr

Ben Gunn, Flare – Baron (Brutus), Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge

Ben looked at the scar with interest, that is a scar of a story. But Ben wasn’t interested in a story now, he was too impatient. “Well now, that is a mighty fine scar you have, one with a great story. But of course, we don’t have time for i…[Read more]

@raxforge @grcr @ellette-giselle

Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge

Brutus suddenly sighed, looking tired. He pulled up his scarf again, having stopped attempting to arouse the guards. “Sadly, if I am not careful, I…” Brutus shook his head, turning to face Ben, before removing his scarf. Down…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @rae @jonas @grcr

Well, I would say now, except that @raxforge isn’t active at the moment so we can’t get his characters to move.

Sorry, I have been so busy and not been able to keep up with all the activity.

@ellette @Ruth @gcrc

Ben Gunn, Flare – Baron (Brutus), Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge

“I have no objec…[Read more]

@rae @ellette-giselle

Lol, I always try to judge when someone is writing a roleplay or not, you can pretty much tweak it to a science.

@ellette-giselle

Oh, btw, neat deduction! Sounds a little Sherlock Homsy.

Thx. Though, tbh, I’m usually not this bright. I think it’s just because I slept better last night than I usually do, lol.

@ellette-giselle

Sorry, I keep missing you 😅

Yeah, I get what you’re saying. It’s a fine line between knowing God is ultimately in control of who comes to believe in Him, but also knowing that He wants to use us to lead others to Him.

@ellette-giselle

I would say Christian Fantasy YA. The classification system nowadays is not really about content and mostly about the age of the protagonist, as MANY YA books now have graphic violence, extreme language, and sexual content but are still classified as YA because the main character is a teen or young adult. Some libraries also have…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle not a ramble! At least you’re rambling about your writing and not about something random…..as I do quite commonly…..eheheheheh you remember THOSE conversations which I’m NOT gonna bring up on this forum after this lolllll

And I think 13 is fine tbh. Your books are actually not that bad in terms of violence so far.

@ellette-giselle

Sounds good! Yes, I think I get what you’re saying about Divine Election, but I don’t really know how it would change evangelism for me. Either way, God wants us to share Him with others. Ultimately, He knows who is going to accept that gift or not, but that doesn’t change the way we should approach it, right?

I’m also pretty…

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@ellette-giselle aww cute, although I have NO idea who Kenna and Zeke are lolll