@ellette-giselle
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 18 hours ago
Just watching Avatar the Last Airbender for the first time with my sibling in. 12 Chapters into Book 1 right now. Prince Zuko and his uncle have been my favourite characters so far.
Lol. It’s very affective. Trust me…………..
Sounds like you are speaking form experience here.
well I want Joseph to have SOME faith. Plus, its easy…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 18 hours ago
Here is the unfinished chapter. (Anyone else who want to read it and/or help me out can as well)
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hybridlore posted a new activity comment 5 days, 19 hours ago
@ellette-giselle
That’s good with me! I might not be able to give you my main one since my mom prefers me to use a different one for people I don’t know irl. Give me a sec and I’ll figure it out. -
Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 19 hours ago
Give me five minutes please, and I will try to post what I have written so far so that you will have the context you need. Warning, there may be more inconcitecies/grammer mistakes in here than usual. And this is going to be a long chapter. (I might split it into two for my third draft.)
(Oh, you know what would really smart? Is…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 23 hours ago
If you could share a bit more detail I might have an easier time coming up with ideas.
Yup, it’s Eric. (How did you know?)
Eric was hiding by the blockade, where he was waiting for any of the rescued Faithful to show up. However, he made the mistake of hiding to close and was spotted when some soldiers dismounted to see if they…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 23 hours ago
There was a little box holding the ring that had been his mother’s. Her favorite shawl was folded beside his father’s hunting knife. His very own Bible lay with the treasures, and beside it were several shiny stone from the creek that flowed through his father’s farm. Joseph leaned forward and set the papers gently back into the b…
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Kefa replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 5 days, 23 hours ago
oh my goodness.
Are you serious?
We can move this conversation to a new forum I guess.
That would be necessary.
You can talk to her after she gets her potato.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 5 days, 23 hours ago
@ellette-giselle I’ll tag you and respond to that post somewhere else!
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Kefa replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 5 days, 23 hours ago
@ellette-giselle
My face after reading Ellette’s post after what I just SAID!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 23 hours ago
Forgot your tag on the previous post
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Kefa replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 5 days, 23 hours ago
*cough cough*
attention ladies, I am afraid you didn’t read the rules, hybridlore is still waiting to get her potato (she still hasn’t said the thing.) So you may not talk to her while she is waiting, that is VERY offensive. And if this happens again, I am going to have to ask you to leave!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 5 days, 23 hours ago
@linus-smallprint LOL.
Really?! I didn’t know you wrote dystopian! What’s it about?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 5 days, 23 hours ago
Okay! Which novel are you working on?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 5 days, 23 hours ago
See, if I have your characters, I don’t think you can keep writing away. They’re mine now. Even Adrian. 😁
Just kidding. Keep writing. I need the next sections.
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hybridlore posted a new activity comment 5 days, 23 hours ago
Oh, gotcha. It’s okay. Does sort of make sense though.
Oh, cool! She has a good voice. It sounds sad though 😢. I like the violin in the background.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days ago
Too late, they’ve been stolen. xD
Lol. It surprisingly let me.
Too bad you didn’t know about this before.
Now you’re too late to save Adrian.
BRAWWWWWHAAAAAH
Hey, the book hasn’t been published yet, right? 😆 There’s still time to change your mind!!!
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hybridlore posted a new activity comment 6 days ago
@ellette-giselle (It’s not letting me reply to you anymore, so I have to tag I think)
Lol. Hmmmm, that’s interesting. I guess it kind of makes sense. Where did you see it?
I have not! Sure, I’d love to see it
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days ago
lol. just joking.
You better be! 🤨
That’s actually pretty funny. We should revive it.
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hybridlore posted a new activity comment 6 days ago
Yeah. It just felt a little weird since Christians normally try to stay away from stuff like that–but then, it had nothing to do with demons or anything. So idk.
Lolol. I don’t know–I would probably have to reread it. I think I preferred Ivan. But Alexei was better than them both, so I would pick him if he didn’t feel so much…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days ago
Lol, he does! I missed when the protection squad actually got formed but from the name, he totally does.
(And Julian. And Leon. *glares at you* Please don’t kill off any more of your charries.)
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