@ellette-giselle
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 1 week ago
Aaron looks like he’s kind of mischievous. Thanks for sharing these!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 1 week ago
Ugh. It ate my response. I’m going to cry and give up! I can’t do this anymore!
Try breaking it up into smaller sections next time. You don’t have to answer everyone’s comment in one go. It might be a bit too much for the server to process properly.
arrrrrrrrgh!!!! But I think it’s moving TOO SLOW!!! All of that is just setti…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 1 week ago
One more thing I think you can use to further develop Aaron. You introduced him as someone who gets lost thought to the point where his teacher asks him to come back to the real world. How does this benefit and hinder him later on in the story?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 1 week ago
@linus-smallprint You are my only hope!
I felt a great disturbance in the Force, as if millions of voices suddenly cried out in terror (some were probably named Aaron) and were suddenly silenced. – Obi-wan Kenobi (bit in parenthesis added)
Okay, I have thought through more of what Sara and Whaley have been saying. I’m sorry to…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 1 week ago
Sorry, I’m behind again, I will catch up hopefully by sometime tomorrow.
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 months, 1 week ago
@whalekeeper @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Thank you! <3
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 1 week ago
It might be that you are so used to picturing Aaron’s personality, that your sub-conscience assumes Aaron is known, and thus forgets to describe him.
YES THAT’S WHAT I WAS WONDERING TOO OH MY GOODNESS! I also relate to that XD
The fiercely loyal bit is what I find unnatural. He only met Aaron a week ago, and up till t…
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 1 week ago
My goodness Whaley!!! You put into coherent thoughts what I’ve been trying to say this whole time XD XD I wish I could convey my thoughts as well as you lol!
I have written 63 full length novels and countless short stories… so that’s saying a lot
HOW. LITERALLY HOW. I haven’t even written ONE full novel. I’ve onl…[Read more]
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freedom posted a new activity comment 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle I have not. From the trailers I’ve seen, I just don’t/didn’t like the way Hitler seemed to be portrayed and have thus stayed away from it😅
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
I’m not attacking Aaron, I promise! That probably won’t convince you, I know how it is with your baby characters…but just know I’m only trying to help XD I love him! I just think he has so much more potential and can be even better!!!
It’s not just him crying…it’s really knowing him and having an intimate emotional c…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
I wouldn’t say bland . Bland is too extreme for Aaron.
I just can’t see much of his character right now.
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 months, 2 weeks ago
I will find a way…😎😜
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Sara replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Sooo, I’ll have to see what you think, but I’ve been told by my beta readers that the first half of the book is about the situation Aaron is in, and the second half is about HIM personally. The first half sets the stage, the second half goes deep into the character. so, You’ll have to tell me what you think.
Personally, I don’t…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
I’m going to read that last part later. I need to go out and buy my sister a birthday present whale she is at work.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
You’re welcome. I’m encouraged to hear you found that encouraging.
I’m only 14…and it makes me mad when my writing’s not as good as older writers’…but then I have to slow down and remember that I’m doing good for the age I’m at and I have plenty of time to get better!!!
I should let you know I was horrible at writing until…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Character Songs/Playlists! in the forum Music 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009, @ellette-giselle
Okay, I’m going to try this ‘Create a Playlist for Your Story’ thing, but I am going to need to think about it first. Also, I have one question, what does ‘Main Ship’ mean? Is this something to do with romance (I’m guessing that ship is short for relationship)? The first book in my series does not have any…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Thanks, that makes me feel a little better 🙃😁😅😄
I’m 21. The other guy is 20
Ohhh that explains why your writing’s so good!!!! It all makes sense now!!! lol
I’m only 14…and it makes me mad when my writing’s not as good as older writers’…but then I have to slow down and remember that I’m doing good for the age I’m at and I h…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle
Stepping in here about your conversation about the character’s ages. I do imagine Aaron as around 18 years of age. Similar to you, Ellette, in my church 18-year-olds do get married and do show maturity. There is one who Aaron kind of reminds me of who is a year younger than me, being 20 years old, but I feel…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 months, 2 weeks ago
He was frustrated as anyone would be in the circumstances…… Turin is the one with the wicked temper around here. You can be someone who is naturally very easy going, but who does lose their temper in a certain situation, or at least gets frustrated
Ohhh okay 👍
I think I’d just like to see more of Aaron’s flaws whether or not…[Read more]
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Oh girl don’t watch the trailer!!! It’s horrible!! No, just try the movie. Once you watch it you’ll understand. It’s not what you think. Don’t worry. It’s so, so good, and I cry oceans!!