Ellette Giselle

@ellette-giselle

First chapter was good, though I’m a bit confused. Does this take place in the real world, or in a fictional world? Also how old is Aaron?

@ellette-giselle

Thanks!! It was fun, just very, very tiring XD

@ellette-giselle

Sorry I haven’t been getting back to you! I was at a lake house for a few days with friends. But now I’m back, so I’ll probably read over the first chapter this morning and tell you my thoughts. Sorry again!

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Ok, so for anyone who read the first chapter. Jonathan’s brother has been taken away to Academy (as was shown) and this is a day or so later. not much happened in that time that would…[Read more]

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*looks up what aesthetic means*

eh… not really. I could be using the word wrong, idk, cuz I guess I just meant it more in a… mmm… vibe sense? Ehhhhhhhhh…… just exclude that note. 😅

@ellette-giselle

Yes! That makes much more sense. Ok, we’ll see how this turns out. I’m glad this girl has a skirt. As I mentioned before, I draw all my girls in skirts or dresses, so it’s a little hard not to make girl’s legs look like guy’s. haha. (I never wear anything but dresses or skirts which could help make that harder. lol)

haha lol!
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part II

@ellette-giselle

And by “something kawaii”, I basically mean just something cute as a front design, like on a tee shirt… so something like this would work:

@ellette-giselle

That is completely not me, so we’ll see how this goes. lol. 😀

lol same 😄

Oh, btw, do you have a picture of the tank-top. I’m not a fashion person so I have no idea what “something Kawaii” means. haha

lol I’ll have to use real pics….

The tank is very plain, and would look something like this:

part II of this message…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Whenever you have time, could you draw my boi Riker? 👀

Name: Riker Franz Schind (you can just include his first name, lol)

Age: 26-27

Gender: Male

Clothing: Black WW2 Era SS/ Totenkopverbande (Death Head Unit) 1st Lieutenant officer uniform (I can provide pics if needed)

Time period (Or the time period…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Alrighty, I’ll give a character of mine! 😄

Name: Fir Sayre

Age: Fifteen

Gender: Female

Clothing: She typically wears a stylish halter-top white tank top with something kawaii on the front, a pink hoodie wrapped around her waist, a knee length pink or pastel blue skirt, and some kind of white sneaker with white s…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

These characters sound so cool!! What’s the story about?

@ellette-giselle I am a simple person. I see the word “sniper.” I am immediately obsessed. The last two characters I met carrying that job description stole my heart and still haven’t given it back.

so yeah, Ron is amazing already despite the fact I know nothing about him.

I know nothing of Jack either, but I already feel sorry for him. Evan…[Read more]

UPDATE TIME

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Freedom’s Fire is sooooooo close to publishing. Just waiting on the finalized cover designs, complete with the book blurb, and then it’ll all be set…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle OH. MY. GOODNESS. 😭😭😭 TYSM!!! 💖💖💖💖 It really does mean so much!!!!!

My most recent scene was from my 2nd novel which is in the process of being written (over 57k words now tho!!), but I will say that my first novel, Freedom’s Fire, which also features Riker/Leon as the MCs, is set to hopefully publish this Summer…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Love them! Are all of these characters the ones from the story you posted the prologue and chapter about?

Also it’s really cool that you made up most of those quotes! That can be a taxing job sometimes lol 💛💛

@ellette-giselle

Omc where do you find all these quotes? I love them!

@ellette-giselle

Oops I forgot to mention that I deleted the scene with her not wanting to talk to the Great One…so now it’s just the scene with her and Lilitu pretending to be animals.

I really liked it so I put it into the “scene recycling bin” if I need it again, but for now it’s not in the draft.

@ellette-giselle

“Nope, still not lost. Just temporarily misplaced the destination.”

“Left! Left! Left!…your other left!”

“Skilled enough to take it apart Patient enough to put it back together Smart enough to hide the extra parts when I’m done”

Three Krogen quotes right there! LOL Cgecko needs to see this!

Totally can see someone saying…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Love the boards!!

@ellette-giselle

😀 XD

ooo the other boards look good too! The temporarily misplaced quote is funny XD

Oh that’s ok. I was more looking for general response as a reader, not so much critical  feedback as of yet. (though it’s always welcome.)

Ah, ok! 😀