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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
I like Aaron so far, I think his temper adds more depth to him. The other characters are fine, I haven’t gotten to know them as much yet.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Just so you know, I am willing to follow this and give you feedback as well. I don’t think I will get to it today, but I will let you know when I have some feedback. Please tag me for any updates!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Oh! You’re reading the first chapter! Wow that was some time ago.
I was on vacation last week, and am catching up on posts where people tagged me.
Ah yeah, sorry about that. And yes, the reason Sara couldn’t hide was because Don had to stall the agents while Sara closed the hiding place. You see, they all three were supposed to…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Wow, it looks awesome!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Just to match, can you do b&w? Thanks.
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TheShadow replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
Just finished reading this section, and I do have two things to say about it. First, I think you used “questioning look” twice. Second, the cleaning scene was a little long. I think you could shorten it, I understand the purpose of it but it did feel long. Overall, though, this section was good.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Your welcome, and thank you!
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Oh, wow, awesome! I didn’t know you could do that 😅. It sounds really interesting! Okay, I’ll let you know if I decide to!
What is it called?
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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle Thank you! 💖 And I’m soooo looking forward to it!! ✨✨
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Okay!
Name: Rosalind
Age: 20
Gender: female
Clothing: medieval dress (will include reference), golden colored belt, locket, most likely a flower in her hair
Time period (Or the time period the fashion replicates): medieval ages
Physical appearance: long auburn hair (probably braided), hazelnut eyes, a few inches shorter…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle I love the beard!! You did a great job! ✨✨
Sure, I can send a request in! I’ll have you draw a female character this time, but maybe still in black and white. I just love it so much😂 and then they’ll all be a common theme of black and white, so😉🥰
Name: Aadelheide Mary Wagner
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Clothing: Pink 1940s era…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Yes, there is one! I can send a description now if you would like to draw her.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
That’s okay!
And also I’ll have to think about it, I have a lot of characters needed to be drawn XD
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TheShadow replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
I LOVE HIM!!! HE LOOKS GREAT, THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle I’ve actually heard a lot of authors say internal is harder, and I don’t understand it 😂 External is sooooo much harder for me. It wasn’t as hard in the 1st book, but Hans was a huge contributor to that
lol, you’re good. Ik you don’t know my book as well, so you’re fine XD Def noted what you said about external…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle Oh my goodness!!!! 😍😍 I love him!!!!!!!!! Ty so much!!! <3
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Congratulations on publishing your novel! Is it through Amazon, or what? What’s it about?
Okay, awesome! Thanks!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Let’s try that again . . . @ellette-giselle
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