Ellette Giselle

@grcr

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@ellette-giselle

Even though this wasn’t actually Friedrich it was quite good! Like I mentioned before, your artistic skills are pretty amazing! The hair is… not quite Friedrich’s. And the facial expression isn’t really his either. (and of course the clothing is off) but otherwise pretty good.

In a short…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Thanks for second place! Also, having a specific character’s look in your head and thus criticizing based on that has nothing to do with being obsessed with fashion. That’s just you showing concern for your character. It’s totally ok.

@grcr

Congratulations! You are at two wins now! I don’t know if I’ve asked you this or not yet, but what software do you use for your drawings?

@keilah-h

Congratulations on second place!

@ellette-giselle

Again with the hair! 

You described him having ‘chin-length hair’, so I looked that up for men, and drew what I found. I suppose…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Woah, wait… wow. Thank you! 😄😄

And thanks for the criticism!

except maybe his tunic wouldn’t have as dark of cuffs and collar, and there might be a bit of embroidery. Then again, this could be him in military uniform and then it works perfect.

Ohh… ok. I was concerned about that…

@ellette-giselle

Well if you’re still alive…. I did another 500.

My little sister patted my back and knocked me down like a leaf XD

I have the strength of a leaf, truly

You messed with a speed writer girl. That was a bad idea.

I will leave you alone now if you want.

No, I cAn tAkE iT. It’s FiNe. It’s totally FinE. Seriously though, you can do…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

*Sighs*

Nah, actually, people can just post the words if they want to

*Does another faceplant*

@ellette-giselle

NoOOoOoOooOOO!!! 😭😭😭 Okay here I go

Holy cow that hurt

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @idk

@ellette-giselle oh that’s funny lol

@ellette-giselle lol I can see why

my dad was never the handy type. My grandpa is though, and whenever he comes to watch the house while we’re away on a trip, he often does little fixes around the house.

@ellette-giselle LOL the tool meme

@ellette-giselle 

WAY BETTER! 

Good!

Ok, the magic thing is a little fuzzy still.

That’s because I forgot about that one. Oops. Thanks for the suggestion though, I think I have a good idea on how to fix this.

@keilah-h

Ooo, I like the Charles song!! – Ellette

OOH I LOVE THAT SONG. – Keliah

Ocarina of time does have a good soundtrack. Just fo…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Sorry, the pencil has not inspired me. Just run with the status quo.

@ellette-giselle ikr? I was kinda surprised when that was the song that came up when I clicked the link but I’m not complaining haha

@ellette-giselle

I updated Chapter the 13th with your suggestions. Would you mind taking a look at it again please and see if this is working better? (The only parts I changed were from right after the description of Charles to when he begins to tell his story, so don’t worry about the rest of the chapter.)

Also, on a side note, I still have not…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

If I’m going to be blunt here, reading it I felt like you as the author felt an obligation to let me know that I am still aloud to read fantasy books, so you through that in and then moved on.

Honestly, that was the obligation I felt writing this, so no wonder you picked that up from reading it.

So yeah, I would 100% recommend m…

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@ellette-giselle

Oh, yeah, I’m gonna sit out again 😑 sorry, everyone, that I’ve kinda just not been participating. I don’t have any good excuses :p

@whalekeeper

So, as I said, I’m just debating the opposite side from you, so I most likely do not believe what I’m saying.  In fact, I’m personally more inclined to agree with your side.

Oh, also, I’m gonna ask someone to stop us if we get too heated. I have a tendency to do this when I really get the ball rolling. @ellette-giselle If Whaley…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

It’s very good, but the whole reading fantasy seemed like you started to go into it and then pulled back and skirt5ed the whole problem. I feel like if it’s going to be there at all it needs more. At the moment it feels kinda like “Why?” If you have nothing more to say on the matter, I would consider cutting it.

Hmm. I didn’t…[Read more]