@ellette-giselle
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle Video game music isn’t just one genre though. It’s very, very widespread over multiple genres.
Now, movie soundtracks and classical composers are the other two things I go to when I want music without words, so I would say it’s good to have decently broad horizons.
I would love to hear what all your soundtracks are tbh.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle aww Joseph is so cute, and the fact that he’s like “I have parents! You’re my parents!” is too funny.
also, one little issue I have: maybe wait till Sabina’s at least 18? I’m 17 and I wouldn’t marry a guy now even if I knew him very well. My mom got married at 17 but I was under the impression she was the exception.
I’m…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I should also mention, it is good you include this scene. If you can inspire your readers to think of marriage more Biblically, that is excellent, especially in this day and age. Use Aaron and your story to guide your reader to think about this more deeply.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
“You two wouldn’t understand. Maybe when your older––” Aaron broke off, seeing the looks the two gave him. Then he laughed at himself. “I forgot, both of you are older then I am.”
Arron, you are really letting responsibility get to you too much. My brother tells me this when he’s trying to be funny.
Aaron is really studying his…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle awesome!!
also I don’t know whose turn it is haha
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Just please let me share some good writing soundtracks (or any other thing you want to do soundtracks) with you. 🙂
Okay. What do you got?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I can see why you got upset with the way everyone did the hair. Looks good! I take it this is of him when he is king?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle oooh he looks awesome! I see I was actually pretty close on the clothing lol
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RAE replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
hair and eye color do not make a character alone.
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RAE replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Even though this wasn’t actually Friedrich it was quite good! Like I mentioned before, your artistic skills are pretty amazing! The hair is… not quite Friedrich’s. And the facial expression isn’t really his either. (and of course the clothing is off) but otherwise pretty good.
In a short…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle Thanks for second place! Also, having a specific character’s look in your head and thus criticizing based on that has nothing to do with being obsessed with fashion. That’s just you showing concern for your character. It’s totally ok.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Congratulations! You are at two wins now! I don’t know if I’ve asked you this or not yet, but what software do you use for your drawings?
Congratulations on second place!
Again with the hair!
You described him having ‘chin-length hair’, so I looked that up for men, and drew what I found. I suppose…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Woah, wait… wow. Thank you! 😄😄
And thanks for the criticism!
except maybe his tunic wouldn’t have as dark of cuffs and collar, and there might be a bit of embroidery. Then again, this could be him in military uniform and then it works perfect.
Ohh… ok. I was concerned about that…
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whaley replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Well if you’re still alive…. I did another 500.
My little sister patted my back and knocked me down like a leaf XD
I have the strength of a leaf, truly
You messed with a speed writer girl. That was a bad idea.
I will leave you alone now if you want.
No, I cAn tAkE iT. It’s FiNe. It’s totally FinE. Seriously though, you can do…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
*Sighs*
Nah, actually, people can just post the words if they want to
*Does another faceplant*
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whaley replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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whaley started the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I need to develop core strength if I’m ever going to get good at jiu-jitsu. Every time someone writes and posts 500 words on this thread, I will drop everything I am doing and hold a plank until I face-plant.
You can’t post something you’ve already written, it has to be new if you want me to suffer 😄
Also if anyone makes it to 5,000 words, I wil…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic HELP WANTED! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle oh that’s funny lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle lol I can see why
my dad was never the handy type. My grandpa is though, and whenever he comes to watch the house while we’re away on a trip, he often does little fixes around the house.
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