@ellette-giselle
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@ellette-giselle Believe me, these stories are marketed for 8-year-olds:
- Wings of Fire (dragon series I read once with a good deal of violence. One character’s death is so graphic the writer didn’t even describe it, although that was in a side story that I didn’t read though cause it didn’t grab me.)
- Warrior cats series (LOTS of war and…
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I’m fine with it, but Baron is gonna lose his mind if you do that. lol
Oh you have no idea. Not only is it storming which increases his power, he’s also gonna have to go into fight mode.
I’m good with it
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @hybridlore
Ellis —— Elderstrand (w/ Marcel, Felicity, and Sara)
“I don’t like this place,” Ellis muttered. “Where do we go now?”
Just then, there was a sound of shouting. Ellis turned and saw soldiers scurrying along the wall above. They were trapped.
There was the sound of a patrol coming down a street to the…[Read more]
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @raxforge @grcr
So, your characters are inside the city? Within the wall? Well, I’m thinking of having the city go on lockdown, which may provide some lovely drama. That would also be a good opportunity to send in the NPCs if you’re ready.
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Ben Gunn, Flare – Baron (Brutus), Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge
“How about, no.” Ben did not want to have to fight with more guards, “We should go out of the city, and stay out there for the night.”
Flare nodded with approval.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Leon and Julian—with Baron, Ben Gunn, Flare, and Marcellus, Everstrand edge
Leon stared at the scar, and he felt a tightness in his throat. He knew the kind of men responsible for something like this. In fact, that was why he was here. He glanced over at his friend. Julian’s face had paled, and he was clenching and u…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@raxforge @ellette-giselle @grcr
I’m gonna write a really short rp this time.
Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge
Baron gently replaced his scarf, careful to make sure it covered the scar, before turning away so that his face was cast in shadow.
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Ben Gunn, Flare – Baron (Brutus), Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge
Ben looked at the scar with interest, that is a scar of a story. But Ben wasn’t interested in a story now, he was too impatient. “Well now, that is a mighty fine scar you have, one with a great story. But of course, we don’t have time for i…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@raxforge @grcr @ellette-giselle
Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge
Brutus suddenly sighed, looking tired. He pulled up his scarf again, having stopped attempting to arouse the guards. “Sadly, if I am not careful, I…” Brutus shook his head, turning to face Ben, before removing his scarf. Down…[Read more]
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @jonas @grcr
Well, I would say now, except that @raxforge isn’t active at the moment so we can’t get his characters to move.
Sorry, I have been so busy and not been able to keep up with all the activity.
@ellette @Ruth @gcrc
Ben Gunn, Flare – Baron (Brutus), Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge
“I have no objec…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Lol, I always try to judge when someone is writing a roleplay or not, you can pretty much tweak it to a science.
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Oh, btw, neat deduction! Sounds a little Sherlock Homsy.
Thx. Though, tbh, I’m usually not this bright. I think it’s just because I slept better last night than I usually do, lol.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Sorry, I keep missing you 😅
Yeah, I get what you’re saying. It’s a fine line between knowing God is ultimately in control of who comes to believe in Him, but also knowing that He wants to use us to lead others to Him.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I would say Christian Fantasy YA. The classification system nowadays is not really about content and mostly about the age of the protagonist, as MANY YA books now have graphic violence, extreme language, and sexual content but are still classified as YA because the main character is a teen or young adult. Some libraries also have…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle not a ramble! At least you’re rambling about your writing and not about something random…..as I do quite commonly…..
eheheheheh you remember THOSE conversations which I’m NOT gonna bring up on this forum after this lolllllAnd I think 13 is fine tbh. Your books are actually not that bad in terms of violence so far.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Sounds good! Yes, I think I get what you’re saying about Divine Election, but I don’t really know how it would change evangelism for me. Either way, God wants us to share Him with others. Ultimately, He knows who is going to accept that gift or not, but that doesn’t change the way we should approach it, right?
I’m also pretty…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle aww cute, although I have NO idea who Kenna and Zeke are lolll
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle 17, almost 18. Remember how I was making a big deal about Sabina getting married that young because I could barely imagine getting married at my age? lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@ellette-giselle If you can’t find any way to trim it down, I’d rather you keep the whole thing than delete it entirely.
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