@ellette-giselle
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rar @grcr @raxforge
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Leon, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare) This name list is so long. XD
“I’m Marcel.” He held Leon’s hand firmly. His speech was quieter and more gutteral than the other’s, and he made a conscious effort to raise it over the…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
Whoa, what happened to Brutus’ speech?
When whispering, /s/ and /t/ are most pronounced and can be overheard. Brutus often replaces these sounds with /th/ when whispering. It’s a precaution.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@ellette-giselle no it’s not bad, I just haven’t read it yet. Lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @grcr @rae @raxforge
Leon and Julian –> with Baron, Ben Gunn, Marcellus, and Flare, meeting up with Ellis, Marcel, Sara, and Fel. Elderstrand edge.
Leon narrowed his eyes. He couldn’t be sure… but were those feathers on the stranger’s shoulders? He shook the thought aside. “We a…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 2 days ago
@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @grcr @rae @raxforge is that everyone?
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara)
Before answering, Marcel glanced at Ellis, who still watched the road. The sword-wielding young man gave a nod. The soldiers had passed them.
“We came from outside the city,” Marcel called. “The soldiers think we’re…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 2 days ago
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle @grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper @hybridlore @loopylin @jonas
Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Marcellus, Flare, Leon, and Julian, about to meet up with Ellis, Marcel, Sara, and Fel, I think. Elderstrand edge.
Yay. A storm. Brutus felt an unintentional rise in his powers, formulating itself as a barrier of wind around him. Brutus…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@ellette-giselle @raxforge @rae @whalekeeper @hybridlore @jonas @loopylin
An hour later, and I confused myself. Shout-out to my superpower called Overthinking. 😑
Marcellus — Everstrand | with Ben Gunn, Flare, Brutus, Leon, and Julian—near Marcel, Sara, Felicity, and EllisÂ
Marcellus pulled a folded, yellow bucket hat from the front pock…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@hybridlore @jonas @whalekeeper @loopylin @grcr @ellette-giselle
I would be fine with combining are groups! I think the crystal explosion Rosemary caused would be a good reason for them to meet, maybe they would notice the giant crystal spikes suddenly burst into the sky. I don’t know, just an idea.
Also my thing probably wasn’t clear enough.…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Tbh, I’m pretty much always on here. Even when I’m not logged in. I watch everything in incognito mode.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@hybridlore @jonas @ellette-giselle
I set up our group so we are in an alley, within eyesight of the bigger group. 👍
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
We were talking about joining our group with @rae @raxforge @grcr and @ellette-giselle‘s group (Baron, Ben, Flare, Marcellus, Julian, and Leon.) That’s kind of a lot, but I don’t expect this section of the RP to be all that much longer anyway.
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Kefa replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
ooooh, ok!
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@rae @raxforge @ellette-giselle
Our characters are right next to yours, see below.
Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara)
The four travellers tried to look inconspicuous in the dark. Their soaked clothes mostly blended in with the background. Marcel noticed Felicity’s bright hair, and motioned for her to shove…[Read more]
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Kefa replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Nope! Why?
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @hybridlore
Ellis —— Elderstrand (w/ Marcel, Felicity, Sara)
Ellis nodded. “Let’s go. Quick!”
The group slipped into the alley and waited in silence as the soldiers neared the street.
“Spread out!” someone shouted. “They must be here somewhere.”
Ellis gripped his sword tight, prepared to silence the first person who…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Look, if anyone picks up the series at book two, they deserve to be confused. *shrug*
I have a friend with the same mindset. Alcatraz Smeadry will probably approve heartily!
WHAT? That doesn’t even fit with the period!!!
Like I said, my mind was in a weird place. Specifically in the place of a reader snacking on some y…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
That works! Just swap wife and son for parents.
The one thing I’m going to criticize is what Charles says when his son is saved:Â
Okay, I will see what I can do about that. Though I may put this one off for a bit. Thank you for pointing this out. I’m not the most emotional person, so sometimes I struggle with writing em…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Lol, I was wondering when you would start wanting the backstory.
This is a good opportunity to see how someone who has not read Book I can understand this book. Like it or not, some people will start to read your series with Book II, III, or IV. Remember to provide the context for these readers so that they will be able to…[Read more]
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