Ellette Giselle

DROPPING THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!

Just so you know, it’s not edited…heh…heh…

so just bear with me XD

Tags: @jonas @grcr @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @ellette-giselle @rae @and-my-brain-stopped-working

“Please! Someone help me!” Neveah gasped for breath, frantically scanning the crowds for a familiar face.

Where could Sef have gon…

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@ellette-giselle

Sorry it took a sec!

That’s okay!

“Julius, what a surprise,” Ignatius said in a low voice. “I see that you were a traitor all along.”

I KNEW IT! I KNEW YOU COULDNT BE TRUSTED IGNATIUS!!!

Chapter 11 and 12 were great, although it seems to me like more than two months had passed since Julius and Marcus last saw each other. Ma…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Chapter four was really smooth and was a lot easier to follow! I don’t have hardly any comments.

Except maybe one thing…maybe give more detail about why Julius is so mad that Marcus is missing. It just kind of shows Julius “throwing a fit” for no apparent reason. Maybe show us his thoughts about why is is scared/angry and…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I am so sorry…I just can’t keep up with the ammount of chapters you write

That’s insane XD XD

I will try to go over chapter 3/4 soon, I forgot where I left off!!

But about the plot, I was just wondering what your storyline looked like.

I was concerned that you might not have enough plot for a full novel, but since it’s a…[Read more]

I can never get your tag right apparently 🤦🏻‍♀️

@ellette-giselle

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@ellette-giselle

Keep an eye out, I’m about to post the next chapter.

Yesss!!

@ellette-giselle

Now someone is starting to get tangled in the is-he-is-he-not? phase. Love it!!

I can’t make up my mind about Ignatius XD

@ellette-Giselle

So there’s this unwritten rule on KP about joining new topics, and it basically goes like this, “Pop in wherever you want”. If you want to join the conversation, you just do. If you feel bad about it, don’t, because everyone does it too.

I understand the feeling, like you’re barging into a stranger’s house when you’re new here,…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thank you for sending him! I love drawing for people!

Of course, thanks so much for drawing him! Also, somehow I forgot to mention this, but he’s a knight.

@theshadow

So…I think it’s a really good idea. I mean, this is a dark world, although it’s not as dark as the world you might be writing about. But it’s still riddled with sin. I think that writing a book around horrible topics might just allow the goodness of God to shine through even more strongly–just like how a light is brighter in a dark…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ooh that’s really good advice, I’ll keep it in mind, thanks!!

@ellette-giselle

Okay, sorry this took so long, but here’s the character I finally decided on:

Name: Eldred

Age: 21

Gender: male

Clothing: medieval tunic and leggings accustom to knights, as well as a cross that hangs around his neck

Time period (Or the time period the fashion replicates): medieval era

Physical appearance: tall, muscular, j…[Read more]

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@ellette-giselle

Note: There is no description in this one of the courtyard because the description would be in the chapter before.

Okay, that makes sense!

Chapter 9 was good, I like the contrast of Julius’ superstition and Marcus’ faith.

He looked at Ignatius closely. There was something in his tone…

Okay, but this makes me think Ignatius is tr…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Wow, that was really good! I like what you said about the light shining in the darkness. Thanks!

@whalekeeper

I guess I never thought about it that way. Tbh, the only reason the post apocalyptic world exists is because of the main character (he didn’t cause it, but you’ll see why in a second). The main character is supposed to…[Read more]

@jonas

Wow…this is a lot to think about and really helpful! Thank you!!

I don’t think there’s anything wrong with it as it is, it really evokes a certain mood, and has really strong imagery.

Okay good XD

Yeah, the first line of the book is always the hardest because that’s how the readers decide whether or not to keep reading!

These three par…

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Update
I’M DONE!!!!!!
It’s not exact, but I am proud to announce I finished around 12 hours of writing! I wrote somewhere around 9000 words, but after going through and editing sections, I was left with only about 8700 words of progress. Not as far as I hoped, but that’s still about nine days of work for me in one day!

I’m thinking about making…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

are you threatening my character? Isn’t Ignatius just a nice soldier boy who really wants to help Marcus?

Yes I’m threatening him XD. He’s still a praetorian, so I’m not going to trust him completely. I don’t know, the way he responded to Julius’ answers sounded like he was suspicious of Marcus…. Then again, maybe he is just a nic…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

The last scene was sooo cute, I liked it a lot! Also Julius’ internal dialogue and conflict was good. Ignatius, if you lay a finger on Marcus, it’s not ending well for you!

One thing that I think you could add is more description of the places though, such as when Julius and Ignatius are talking.