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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years ago
Yeah it makes sense! I think it was really well written.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Their ages haven’t changed since chapter 6. I’ll try to make that clearer
Huh…I still don’t see it XD
(poor Eloy, everybody hates him :/)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years ago
yep.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years ago
The Jonathan Park cliffhanger music is going through my head after that last scene. What was Sabina doing during this?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Probably not, sorry. Romance is not the most appealing to me. The closest you get to making me want to read it is that your back cover lets me know this is a Christian book and is similar to The Princess Bride (which is one romance story I do enjoy due to its witty nature. I am curious to know though, is your book witty in this…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Yes, I think this is more intriguing. The layout here also looks cleaner than the last one.
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009 Pinterest account is back up; y’all should be able to see it now😁
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Hans is just evil, lol. Send him to the character chopping block.
I mean……fair enough. XXD@rae @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Ok, finally read through everything that was said.
Let’s calm down a little bit😂😂
Let’s get something straight: I don’t love Hans either. The man is evil beyond a doubt (as all…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
TY girl!!!! 💖💖💖💖 It’ll probably be $14.99! It’s at least 300+ pages, so I didn’t think 14.99 was at all outrageous. And Fin is absolutely amazing. I see him as possibly being a fan favorite, along with Isaiah🥰
Aaaaaaand I hate Hans already.
😂😂 It’s ok. You don’t have to love Hans. I wouldn’t say I love Hans, but I don’t hate h…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle @rae I love seeing y’all fight over Hans😂😂 And I’m the author, I know how evil he is, but I wouldn’t say I hate him like I once did. The man is truly broken, and you may not believe me, but he’s an amazing family man and loves his wife and sons dearly🥹💖 he’s someone that you can see both the good and evil…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Monthly Prompts!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@ellette-giselle I think basically we just find prompts and post them every month, or follow previous ones I guess, and if you want you can write a short snippet of story that involves that subject, or pull one that fits the description from a story of yours.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@ellette-giselle LOLLLLL
the bit about arguing but then realizing you’re distant cousins got me haha
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
(And you thought Freedom was mean to her main characters lol.)
Lol 😅
Does it end there? Hmmmmm, let’s just say that’s where it begins. In every sense of the word. (Did I mention that there are like 20+ chapter left?) No promises for Jonathan though. You interested to find out what happens next………………. ?
20+?? … Yup, I’m totall…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Guess that makes sense but GIVE HANS A CHANCE!!!! DON’T JUST SHUT THE DOOR CUZ HE’S A VILLAIN!!!!
And saddest of all, Hans never got his redemption 😭😭😭😭😭 I won’t say what happens but…poor boi never got his chance to know true love 😭😭😭😭😭
#LoveHansSquad
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years ago
What just happened here?
I like how Turin calls Arron ‘stranger’ once more.
Typo alert here:
“Well, I guess I’ll go back to the house and try to talk with Sabina. I can’t see it going ver well,” sighed Turin.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
You can hate what someone does but that doesn’t mean you have the hate them. Think about it, in God’s eyes we are all the villains, the bad people, there has been no good in us since they day we were born and will never be until His Kingdom. Yet he loves us. It’s the same with me and Hans
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@ellette-giselle Because Fin’s awesome. lol. Say what you want about Hans or Riker, but Fin was cool.
and then he died. ok, fine, he sacrificed himself and that scene was sad but amazing, but still.also, awesome family history. I should go ahead and finish all my fantasy creatures from different country-planets so I can show you which ones…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years ago
@ellette-giselle thanks! lol I procrastinated too much, and then got really busy.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
I get you don’t like the little glimpse you’ve had of my poor Hans but GIVE HIM A BREAK!!!! POOR GUY NEVER GOT TO KNOW PEACE OR FORGIVENESS!!! WHILE HE’S THE VILLAIN, HE’S ALSO THE MOST TORN!!!!!!! HAVE A HEART!!!!!
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