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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle I like it!!
I do think it was kinda hard to figure out who the POV character is. Maybe make that a little more clear.
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Ooooohhh okay, well as long as it’s just satire 😂
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m reading about charries and Vikings!
Lol
YES! 100%
Julian would have shrugged and walked away by now, but Leon used to be that frustrating character, and now he’s trying to do the only thing that was done to him that pulled him out of that downward spin.
All I can say without giving anything away is…Leon, you…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle very helpful backstory.
I was a little concerned, but now at least it’s funny.
Still a little traumatizing for new Christians and such if you don’t know the context though lol
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hybridlore posted an update 1 year, 8 months ago
Happy November 1–National Authors Day!! @kyronthearcanin @ellette-giselle @freedomwriter76 @livingwoodchronicles @anyone-with-a-published-book
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Many who recalled that night would think to themselves that the sky was weeping.
If so, many wept with it.
Love this!
I’m interested to read more, even though I don’t really know much about it since I haven’t read most of the first book. I might have read an chapter or two. 😅
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Okay.
That was somethin’ else.
I’m not sure what to think of this. On the one hand, I kinda appreciate his zeal. On the other hand, I feel like going full on Pyro and making a show of burning Disney characters might be funny in a dark kinda way, but it’s also likely to alienate non-Christians cause then they’re…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Ah, okay, not your cup of tea.
The one you shared is fine. I could see this ending up on one of my playlists. It does have emotion. I just feel like it was a bit on the dramatic side and some of the notes were a little too sharp for this scene. I asked my sister for her thoughts since she doesn’t have a load of Chrono Trigger…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Hello!
Book 2 time, I see. Well let’s get started on it.
Think this is a good opening. It sets a darker stage than the previous book, but you warned us. Also, how the characters act makes sense. Joseph is traumatized and Sabina is trying to be strong for him while dealing with her struggles.
So for this book, are you going…[Read more]
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whaley the great and terrible replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m reading about charries and Vikings!
Lol I was up late, so I got up at eight. And I still have road lag from my trip to D.C. Oh, well.
Yours can meet up with ours, but I feel like the larger the group gets, the harder it will be to pace the conversation.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I think Baron needs French Toast…it would certainly improve his mood XD
Sorry that Brutus is so difficult. I’m not trying to make him that way, he just is.
Frustrating charrie.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Leon, and Julian at the Everstrand edge
Brutus’s eyes met Leon’s as if he were going to make some kind of firy remark, but he turned his gaze away. “Hesitation can mean death. Learn that and quick.” He pulled a dagger off of one of the guards, turning it so that it reflected his…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Baron (Brutus) with Ben Gunn, Flare, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge.
“I don’t…” Brutus stopped. No, no they did not need to hear the rest of that sentence, it would lead to questions. Brutus gave a short nod, cautiously backing away until he reached the unconscious city guards. By these he knelt, studying their…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
btw, is Brutus Baron’s name, because if it’s not I’d like him to give his name as “Baron” soon, because this whole two different name thing is starting to get me mixed up.
Sorry about that.
His name is not Brutus, it is in fact Baron. But he uses the name Brutus for…reasons.
@elette @raxforge
Baron (Brutus)—With Ben Gunn,…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m just gonna run with it.
Baron—with Ben, Flare, Julian, and Leon, Everstrand edge
Baron knocked Julian and Leon back with a gust of strong wind. He winced as he got up, before sending another gust of wind to bash some city guards against the wall of a building, knocking them out.
“Ben Gunn? Which supervisor are…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Ooops…
Ben grabbed the man’s arm, trying to loosen it, but it was no use. “My- name- is- Ben- Gunn- who- are- you?”
Remove this and keep the rest.
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Should we just say that Ben Gunn said his line, then Leon and Julian attacked Baron, then Flare started playing?
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
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Happy National Author’s Day to you!!!!!
Yippy! We get our own holiday and we didn’t even have to go to war to earn it.
Take that back. We totally went to war. A war with words and the pen, which is mightery then the sword.
‘Tis mightier indeed. And thanks 😅
Ahem @freed_and_redeemed 🤣
Happy Author’s Day to you as well!!! 💜✨