Ellette Giselle

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Okay, I updated the chapter. Let’s see what you think now.

Chapter the 22nd – The Coward

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Hmm… Stripe jumps on Tyn and is preoccupied with that fight? (Though it probably would not last longer than 2 seconds…) Rour attempts to debate with Stripe, saying his quaral is only with Alan and any who stand in the way (Which is why he arrested Martha)? He may be asking to leave peacefully with Alan and Tyn, promising to…[Read more]

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A week passed.

This feels a little odd right at the start of the book. I can see why you’re doing this, you’re trying to show us how over time he is adjusting, so I wouldn’t say it is a bad thing. It just feels unusual.

Joseph looked away. After a few minutes he heard Joseph’s voice in the kitchen. Sabina said something, and t…

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@ellette-giselle ok actually I just looked at the website. There’s a button to sign up for notifications that will tell you later when registration starts

@ellette-giselle idk sorry. It’s been a couple years

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YIKES! You changed your pic!

He he!

Anyhow, I don’t know why I even brought that up. I guess because it gives me recoil whenever I see it.

That’s fair. I feel the same way about ‘you do you’.

I’m trying to rework Chapter the 22nd like you suggested, but am a little stuck on what to do with Stripe. With Alan down, he would p…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Glad I was able to tell you about it in time!

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If I do go down there someday, would you be willing to meet me?

Sure! I know where the good coffee shops are.

I think the cut off is 18ish? You have to still be in high school

Yes it costs. You should look up the website for details I don’t remember

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Very well, continue.

@ellette-giselle A teen camp/ conference they have in Moscow every summer. People come from all over the US. You get to be on a team and do activities and listen to talks. There’s a dance at the end of the week and you get a ton of time to bond with teammates while walking around town. It’s a blast, even for a major introvert like me. I’m too old…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle you should go to called conference. You’d love it

@ellette-giselle umm no to all of those. I’ve… accidentally made awkward eye contact with Nate. Thanked Pastor Wilson for a sermon once. I wasn’t trying to pull the celebrity card or anything, just telling yall what I know from being in the community and growing up around Christ church Moscow people.

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I mean you want to meet all of those people

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You have goals, girl XD

@ellette-giselle yeah lol I’ve gotten that vibe from you

@ellette-giselle ok! I didn’t say remove the scene, it’s good.

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No. I only do that once…..? But I really, really needed that scene to set Sabina’s stage, and there really wasn’t another way to get that scene, because she wouldn’t have broken down like that in front of Joseph. I want to drive the point that he is not he only one hurting. She just watched her fiance die on their wedding day. Sh…

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@whalekeeper exactly lol

@ellette-giselle that’s good.

@loopylin oh that’s cool!!

@ellette-giselle lol he’s just a guy chill